列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "he is most of the times" and "black and white checklist in my. Phone." To improve, try to use clear and correct sentences, avoid redundancy, and keep your answer within 5 sentences. Also, use linking words properly to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and saves time. Moreover, it ensures that I do not forget any important items. Therefore, I mostly use a checklist app on my phone for convenience.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words like "uh" and incomplete sentences. To improve, try to speak more fluently and clearly, avoid fillers, and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep your answer concise and structured.

示例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. I usually use a checklist on my phone to remember important tasks. Occasionally, I also write lists on paper, and both methods work well for me.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "good quality of full memorized the thing" and "they don't use to make the list under." To improve, use simpler and clearer sentences, avoid repetition, and organise your ideas logically with linking words.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. Therefore, they do not find lists necessary. However, I prefer to use a checklist on my phone to stay organized.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some unclear phrases like "this is my review" and repetition of "sometimes." To improve, avoid redundancy, clarify your points, and use linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

示例: To be honest, I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because the notes app allows me to write everything conveniently. However, sometimes I use paper lists when I want to review my tasks physically.

× Yes I do because making a list helps me to be organized and moreover it helps me to save my time.

✓ Yes, I do because making a list helps me to be organized and moreover it helps me save my time.

The verb 'helps me to save' is correct but in English, the 'to' is often omitted after 'help'. So 'helps me save' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Apart from this, sometimes I make a list so that I could I do not forget the important things.

✓ Apart from this, sometimes I make a list so that I do not forget the important things.

The phrase 'so that I could I do not forget' is incorrect and redundant. The correct structure is 'so that I do not forget' to express purpose.

× For this reason I can say that he is most of the times I make a black and white checklist in my. Phone.

✓ For this reason, I can say that most of the time I make a black and white checklist on my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'He is most of the times' is incorrect and 'in my. Phone' is fragmented. Correct sentence uses 'most of the time' and 'on my phone' with proper punctuation.

× Is it work? Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because some, uh, because it helps me to organize and myself and moreover, uh, by making a checklist in my mobile phone, I do not forget that my important task.

✓ Does it work? Yes, sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me organize myself and moreover, by making a checklist on my mobile phone, I do not forget my important tasks.

'Is it work?' is incorrect question form; correct is 'Does it work?'. Also, 'helps me to organize and myself' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me organize myself'. 'That my important task' should be 'my important tasks'. Preposition 'on' is used with 'mobile phone'.

× Apart from this, there are some paper return list is also I sometimes made and it really works for me because it.

✓ Apart from this, I sometimes make some paper return lists and it really works for me because of that.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect word order. 'I sometimes made' should be 'I sometimes make' to keep present tense consistent. 'Paper return list is also' is incorrect; it should be 'some paper return lists'. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity.

× According to my perspective, it depends upon person's mentality and the thinking power.

✓ From my perspective, it depends on a person's mentality and thinking power.

The phrase 'According to my perspective' is incorrect; 'From my perspective' is correct. Also, 'depends upon' can be simplified to 'depends on'. 'Person's' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Some of the persons are having the good quality of full memorized the thing, so they they don't use to make the list under they don't find it very important.

✓ Some people have the good quality of fully memorizing things, so they don't use to make lists as they don't find it very important.

'Persons' is less common; 'people' is preferred. 'Are having' should be 'have'. 'Good quality of full memorized the thing' is incorrect; correct is 'good quality of fully memorizing things'. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'Use to make the list under' is incorrect; correct is 'don't use to make lists as'.

× But somewhere I if I talk about myself then I always prefer to make a checklist in my mobile phone.

✓ But if I talk about myself, I always prefer to make a checklist on my mobile phone.

The phrase 'somewhere I if I talk' is incorrect and redundant. Correct structure is 'But if I talk about myself'. Preposition 'on' is used with 'mobile phone'.

× To be very honest, I always prefer to make a checklist in my mobile phone because it is having an application notes where we can write each and everything, so it is more convenient rather than the paper.

✓ To be very honest, I always prefer to make a checklist on my mobile phone because it has a notes application where we can write everything, so it is more convenient than paper.

Preposition 'in' should be 'on' for 'mobile phone'. 'It is having' is incorrect; use 'it has'. 'An application notes' should be 'a notes application'. 'Each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices. 'More convenient rather than the paper' should be 'more convenient than paper'.

× But sometimes, sometimes I do all the paper because this is my review.

✓ But sometimes, I use paper because this is my preference.

The phrase 'I do all the paper' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'I use paper'. 'Because this is my review' is unclear; 'because this is my preference' is clearer and more appropriate.