列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the mall because it helps me remember what I need to buy. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time while shopping.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has unclear phrases. Use a clear topic sentence and explain why making a work list is helpful, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on clarity.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize important tasks. This way, I can remember what I need to do each day and work more efficiently.

建议: Your answer has many unclear words and is somewhat rude. Try to give a polite and clear opinion with specific reasons, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid negative labels and focus on explaining reasons logically.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or bothersome. Also, they may prefer to remember things naturally rather than writing them down.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Use a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and finish your sentences properly.

示例: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can check and update my list anytime and anywhere using an app.

× No surcos well are usually like down. Shopping list when I go to the shopping mall.

✓ No, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the shopping mall.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. It seems the student intended to say they usually make a shopping list when shopping. Correct sentence structure improves clarity and communication.

× So yeah, so I always make list to shopping list.

✓ So yeah, I always make a shopping list.

The phrase 'make list to shopping list' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'make a shopping list' using the indefinite article 'a' before a singular countable noun.

× Yeah. I do well. I always make a maker to delete for my work list for my work because it is very helpful and what what is the important thing and I can remember what I am doing today.

✓ Yes, I do. I always make a to-do list for my work because it is very helpful to remember important tasks and what I am doing today.

The original sentence contains unclear phrases like 'make a maker to delete' and repeated words. The correction uses the proper term 'to-do list' and clarifies the purpose of the list. Also, 'well' is unnecessary here.

× So it's very healthy, it's very impact.

✓ So it's very helpful and effective.

The words 'healthy' and 'impact' are incorrectly used as adjectives here. The correct adjectives to describe usefulness are 'helpful' and 'effective'.

× Well, there are several legions why some people don't like making a leap, making a little bit because I think is is making a list if is so bothersome to them.

✓ Well, there are several reasons why some people don't like making a list because I think making a list is bothersome to them.

The word 'legions' is incorrect; the correct word is 'reasons'. Also, 'making a leap, making a little bit' is unclear and replaced with 'making a list'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× So I think these people, these peoples are usually lazy person because they don't like to.

✓ So I think these people are usually lazy because they don't like to make lists.

'Peoples' is incorrect plural form; 'people' is already plural. Also, 'lazy person' should be plural 'lazy people' or just 'lazy'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Well, these days I always choose to. Making a list of my palm because it's very helpful to remember and check anytime, anywhere.

✓ Well, these days I always choose to make a list on my phone because it's very helpful to remember and check anytime, anywhere.

'Making a list of my palm' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on my phone'. Also, 'choose to' should be followed by the base verb 'make' not 'making'.

× So yeah, so I so so making at least usually making a list using my application on my.

✓ So yeah, I usually make a list using an application on my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence structure.