列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy shopping freely without restrictions. Making a list feels like a chore and reduces my enjoyment.」のように簡潔で明確な表現を心がけてください。

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I enjoy shopping freely without restrictions. Making a list feels like a chore and reduces my enjoyment.

建议: 回答は質問に対して部分的に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。より明確に、簡潔に答え、理由や効果を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「Yes, I sometimes make a list of my work hours to coordinate with my teammates. It helps us share information effectively, so it works well.」のように表現すると良いです。

示例: Yes, I sometimes make a list of my work hours to coordinate with my teammates. It helps us share information effectively, so it works well.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「Some people don't like making lists because it reminds them of unfinished tasks, which can be stressful and annoying.」のように簡潔で明確な表現を心がけてください。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it reminds them of unfinished tasks, which can be stressful and annoying.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。より明確に、簡潔に答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、「I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to share and edit them with my teammates. I don't like writing tasks on paper.」のように表現すると良いです。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to share and edit them with my teammates. I don't like writing tasks on paper.

× Usually I don't like to make any risks about shopping some because of my portion of the shopping is about spending enjoyable time you mean?

✓ Usually I don't like to take any risks when shopping because my part of shopping is about spending enjoyable time, you know?

The phrase 'make any risks' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'take risks'. Also, 'shopping some' is unclear and likely a misuse of quantifiers. 'Portion of the shopping' should be 'part of shopping'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× So by making our way star. It seems that the shopping is not so enjoyable.

✓ So by making our way, it seems that shopping is not so enjoyable.

The phrase 'making our way star' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connection. Correcting to 'making our way' and combining the sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, sometimes I make a list of my work hours when we have to tackle with the other team mates and because we have to share the information of the proceeding of the HM work, Yeah.

✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list of my work hours when we have to tackle the other teammates because we have to share information about the progress of the HM work.

The phrase 'tackle with' is incorrect; 'tackle' does not require 'with'. 'Team mates' should be one word 'teammates'. 'Information of the proceeding' should be 'information about the progress'. The sentence is also long and can be split for clarity.

× So yes, it works out really well, but either works.

✓ So yes, it works out really well, but either way works.

The word 'either' is used incorrectly here. The correct phrase is 'either way works' to indicate that both options are acceptable.

× Hi, it's very difficult question but maybe I'm making lists makes people annoying or frustrating about Oh my God the task is not so finished right now and so maybe people don't like it.

✓ Hi, it's a very difficult question but maybe making lists makes people annoyed or frustrated about 'Oh my God, the task is not finished yet,' so maybe people don't like it.

'I'm making lists makes' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists makes'. 'Annoying' and 'frustrating' are adjectives describing things, but here the feelings of people are described, so 'annoyed' and 'frustrated' (past participles used as adjectives) are correct. The sentence is also awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× It's a seed of a stressor.

✓ It's a source of stress.

The phrase 'seed of a stressor' is not idiomatic English. The correct expression is 'source of stress' to convey that something causes stress.

× I I preferred to making a restore my phone because it is very useful to share the information with my teammate or I can easily edit that.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very useful to share information with my teammates and I can easily edit it.

'Preferred' is past tense but the context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'To making a restore' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a list'. 'Teammate' should be plural 'teammates' to match context. 'That' should be 'it' referring to the list.

× So I don't I don't like writing summaries task on the page.

✓ So I don't like writing summary tasks on paper.

'Summaries task' is incorrect; it should be 'summary tasks' or 'summaries'. 'On the page' is better expressed as 'on paper'. The sentence also has repeated 'I don't' which should be corrected.