列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and avoid spending too much money.

建议: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构复杂且有语法错误，建议使用简单明了的句子，并且避免重复和不必要的复杂表达。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks clearly and keeps my mind focused.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然，建议简化句子，使用更准确的词汇，并避免重复表达。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary sometimes.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议明确表达偏好，避免使用不恰当的短语，并用简单句子说明理由。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and helps me organize tasks efficiently.

× Yes, I make a list where I shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

这里应该用时间状语从句的连接词when，而不是where。where表示地点，和句意不符。

× Before I go to shop, I will make a list of what I am exactly going to buy an I will list all the things I am supposed to buy and summarize all the things into bullet points so that I can get understand what I am exactly supposed to buy without wasting too much money.

✓ Before I go shopping, I will make a list of what I am exactly going to buy, and I will list all the things I am supposed to buy and summarize all the things into bullet points so that I can understand exactly what I am supposed to buy without wasting too much money.

go to shop用法不正确，应该用go shopping。get understand是不正确的搭配，应该直接用understand。句子中and前后需要逗号分隔。

× Yes, I do make a list for my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of my work.

make a list后面通常接of而不是for，表示列出某事物的清单。

× From my point of view, it's really important for me to summarize all the bullet points of exactly what I am going to do in two varieties of bullet points.

✓ From my point of view, it's really important for me to summarize exactly what I am going to do into two varieties of bullet points.

summarize后面直接接内容，不需要of。句子结构调整使表达更清晰。

× It cannot only make me understand what I'm going through, but also make me have a clear mind.

✓ It can not only help me understand what I'm going through, but also help me have a clear mind.

make me understand用法不自然，改为help me understand更合适。

× Well, this is a very interesting question. In my opinion the reason that some people don't like to make lists is only becaused they think is really time consuming trouble some and it's really frivolous for them to make lists too frequently.

✓ Well, this is a very interesting question. In my opinion, the reason that some people don't like to make lists is because they think it is really time-consuming, troublesome, and it's really frivolous for them to make lists too frequently.

because拼写错误，time consuming和troublesome需要连字符连接，且句子中缺少it作主语。

× In my opinion it doesn't work from time to time.

✓ In my opinion, it doesn't work all the time.

from time to time表示偶尔，不符合句意，应该用all the time表示一直。

× Yeah, of course I do prefer to make a list on my paper on my phone.

✓ Yeah, of course I do prefer to make a list on my paper or on my phone.

这里表达选择关系，应该用or而不是重复使用on。

× For example, when I'm over the moon, I will have the willingness to make a list on my phone so that I can understand different kinds of things in different procedures.

✓ For example, when I'm over the moon, I will be willing to make a list on my phone so that I can understand different kinds of things in different procedures.

have the willingness用法不自然，改为be willing更地道。

× It's a really helpful way of improving the efficiency for me.

✓ It's a really helpful way to improve efficiency for me.

way后面接动词不定式to improve更常见，for me放在句尾更自然。