列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because my parents remind me what to buy. Therefore, I can remember the items without writing them down.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng bị lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và dùng từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy chú ý đến cách chia động từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete in one day. If I don't make a list, it is hard to remember everything and organize my time.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo câu có cấu trúc đúng.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it is stressful to have many tasks to complete in one day. They prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a plan.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến câu khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can easily add notes and check my list anytime, which helps me stay organized.

× Now I don't make a list when I shop because when my parents touched me.

✓ Now I don't make a list when I shop because when my parents tell me.

The verb 'touched' is incorrect in this context; the correct past tense verb should be 'told' or present tense 'tell' depending on meaning. Here, 'tell' is appropriate because it refers to parents giving instructions, not physical touching.

× To buy anything, they always say something and I have to remember that because this is the feel, it'll feel things to buy, so I don't need to make a list.

✓ To buy anything, they always say something and I have to remember that because these are the things to buy, so I don't need to make a list.

The phrase 'this is the feel, it'll feel things to buy' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be corrected to 'these are the things to buy' to clearly express the intended meaning.

× Yes, I my soul is for I work because if I don't make a list is very hard to remember everything because I have so many works an I have to do that in one day and I can't remember if I don't have timetable re to arrange this.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because if I don't make a list, it is very hard to remember everything since I have so much work to do in one day and I can't remember if I don't have a timetable to arrange it.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and unclear phrases such as 'I my soul is for I work' and 'works an I have to do that'. These are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have so many works an I have to do that in one day

✓ I have so much work and I have to do it in one day

The noun 'work' is uncountable in this context, so 'works' is incorrect. Use 'much work' instead of 'many works'.

× and I can't remember if I don't have timetable re to arrange this.

✓ and I can't remember if I don't have a timetable to arrange this.

The phrase 'timetable re' is incorrect; it should be 'a timetable to' to correctly connect the ideas.

× I think if people to make a list.

✓ I think if people make a list.

The phrase 'if people to make a list' is incorrect; the infinitive 'to make' should be replaced with the base verb 'make' after 'if'.

× I think this job is important for them and they have they have to finish, they have to complete this jobs in this day an is it prioritized for them?

✓ I think this job is important for them and they have to finish, they have to complete these jobs in this day and it is prioritized for them.

The phrase 'this jobs' is incorrect; 'jobs' is plural so 'these' should be used. Also, 'an is it' is a typo and should be 'and it'.

× So they will make a list and that's why people don't. Make that.

✓ So they will make a list and that's why some people don't make one.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes I make a list on my phone because phones it like my friends so is can remember Liz can take notes and entertaining for me

✓ Yes, I make a list on my phone because my phone is like my friend so I can remember, take notes, and it is entertaining for me.

The original sentence has incorrect pronouns and unclear phrases such as 'phones it like my friends' and 'is can remember Liz'. These are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× so I will I also make a list in my phone to convenience 2 opens and check checkins when I have three times.

✓ so I also make a list on my phone for convenience to open and check things when I have free time.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. The phrase 'convenience 2 opens and check checkins' is unclear and corrected to 'for convenience to open and check things'. 'Three times' is unclear and replaced with 'free time' for clarity.