列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why making a list is helpful.

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I don't forget any important items and can shop more efficiently.

建议: Improve clarity by using correct sentence structure and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you focus and save time. Avoid unclear phrases and be more specific.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me focus on important tasks. By doing this, I avoid wasting time on less important activities and complete my work more efficiently.

建议: Make your answer more coherent by starting with a clear topic sentence and using linking words. Explain reasons why some people prefer flexibility over planning with lists, and give specific examples.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work freely. For example, they enjoy having flexibility to handle tasks as they come instead of following a strict plan.

建议: Use clearer and more natural language. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to compare paper and phone lists and explain why phone lists are more convenient.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily check my list anytime, unlike paper lists which can be lost or forgotten.

× Yes, I do a list, then I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list, then I go shopping.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. This correction improves naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× A list basically mixers that you don't miss out any items when you go for a shopping or in remembering anything.

✓ A list basically ensures that you don't miss any items when you go shopping or when remembering anything.

The word 'mixers' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'ensures' or 'helps'. Also, 'miss out any items' should be 'miss any items'. The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Preposition 'in remembering anything' is better as 'when remembering anything' for clarity.

× Yes, I do make list for my work.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires an article 'a' when singular. Omitting the article causes grammatical error.

× Making list basically reduces the time of wasting time in our other areas rather than focusing on the things which I need to do currently.

✓ Making a list basically reduces wasting time on other areas rather than focusing on the things I need to do currently.

The phrase 'reduces the time of wasting time' is awkward; better to say 'reduces wasting time'. Also, 'in our other areas' should be 'on other areas' to correctly use the preposition with 'wasting time'.

× And it does work when I make a list if curtains my. Unnecessary time where I go searching for other things that is to be done.

✓ And it does work when I make a list because it curtails my unnecessary time spent searching for other things that need to be done.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'curtains' which should be 'curtails'. The sentence structure is corrected to form a clear, complete sentence with proper conjunction and verb agreement.

× Not all the time. Then you make a list.

✓ Not all the time do you make a list.

The original two sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into one sentence with correct inversion improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It goes according to the planning.

✓ It goes according to the plan.

The phrase 'according to the planning' is awkward; 'according to the plan' is the correct and natural expression.

× Sometimes even without list, people like to work with freedom and with the flexibility to cover all the areas that they need to overcome in a day.

✓ Sometimes, even without a list, people like to work with freedom and flexibility to cover all the areas they need to address in a day.

The phrase 'without list' needs an article 'a'. Also, 'overcome' is not the correct verb here; 'address' or 'handle' is more appropriate. The sentence is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Making list on the phone in the modern day sounds more handy.

✓ Making a list on the phone nowadays sounds more handy.

'Making list' requires the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'in the modern day' is better expressed as 'nowadays' for naturalness.

× Imagine fighting in a paper and missing it out.

✓ Imagine losing a paper and missing it.

The phrase 'fighting in a paper' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended meaning is 'losing a paper'. Also, 'missing it out' should be 'missing it'.

× Because in modern day you always carry a phone and not a paper, and taking out phone and taking out your list in the day-to-day activities sounds more easier than having a paper.

✓ Because nowadays you always carry a phone and not paper, taking out your phone and accessing your list during day-to-day activities sounds easier than having paper.

The sentence is a run-on and awkward. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' suffices. 'Taking out phone' should be 'taking out your phone'. Also, 'in modern day' is better as 'nowadays'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.