列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for more natural English. For example, instead of repeating 'I only buy the items I need at the moment' and 'if I remember exactly what I want', you can combine ideas more smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I only buy what I need at the moment. Since I remember exactly what I want, I find writing a list unnecessary, which makes shopping quicker and more convenient for me.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Try to respond directly and clearly, using complete sentences and linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'it helps to know what you will' without finishing the thought. Make sure to explain how making lists helps you study.

示例: I don't make lists for work because I'm still a student. However, I do make lists when I study because they help me plan my subjects effectively. For example, I organize the topics I need to study, which helps me manage my time better.

建议: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct vocabulary ('lists' instead of 'place') and avoid repeating 'maybe'. Also, structure your answer with linking words to explain reasons clearly.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or dislike writing things down. Also, some may feel it's unnecessary if they already know what they want.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains unclear phrases like 'carry out with A2 whatever'. Try to complete your sentences and use clear, natural expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why making lists on your phone is convenient.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry it anywhere I go. Also, I can easily add or remove items without wasting paper, and I can quickly access my list whenever I need it.

× For your work, no, I don't make list for work because I'm still a student.

✓ For your work, no, I don't make a list for work because I'm still a student.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× However, I do make this list when I study because it's so convenient for planning and.

✓ However, I do make this list when I study because it's so convenient for planning.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× For example, I create a plan to organize the subject I need to study and it helps to know what you will.

✓ For example, I create a plan to organize the subjects I need to study, and it helps me know what I will do.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' (see plural issue), and the phrase 'helps to know what you will' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'me' and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× For example, I create a plan to organize the subject I need to study and it helps to know what you will.

✓ For example, I create a plan to organize the subjects I need to study and it helps me know what I will do.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple areas of study, which is more appropriate in this context.

× For example, I create a plan to organize the subject I need to study and it helps to know what you will.

✓ For example, I create a plan to organize the subjects I need to study and it helps me know what I will do.

The pronouns 'you' and 'I' are mixed incorrectly. The speaker should use 'me' and 'I' to refer to themselves consistently.

× I think some people don't like making place because they find it stressful and they maybe don't like to write it and maybe they they know what they want and it's not necessary for them.

✓ I think some people don't like making plans because they find it stressful, and maybe they don't like to write it down, and maybe they know what they want, so it's not necessary for them.

The word 'place' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'plans'. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I prefer a make a list on my phone because it's convenient to carry out with A2 whatever, wherever go.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient to carry it with me wherever I go.

The phrase 'a make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a list'. Also, 'carry out with A2 whatever, wherever go' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'carry it with me wherever I go'.

× Also you can add and remove the items easily and without wasting paper and you quickly access and.

✓ Also, you can add and remove items easily without wasting paper, and you can quickly access them.

The sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. Adding necessary verbs and objects clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.