列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不准确，句子不连贯，建议使用简单明了的句子，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my school assignments with deadlines. This helps me keep track of my work and maintain a good GPA.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达观点，并避免语法错误。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted or pressured by the tasks they have to complete. However, for others, lists can be motivating.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用完整句子，清晰表达原因，并使用连接词。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, seeing the list motivates me to complete my tasks.

× Because I can be oblivious sometimes and.

✓ Because I can be oblivious sometimes.

句子结构不完整，句尾的“and”使句子成为不完整句，应去掉。

× so machine list to help me to prevent the things.

✓ so I make a list to help me prevent things.

“machine list”应为“make a list”，且“prevent the things”表达不准确，应简化为“prevent things”。

× Prevent from forgetting the things are necessary to buy.

✓ Prevent forgetting the things that are necessary to buy.

“Prevent from forgetting”用法错误，正确用法是“prevent forgetting”，且缺少关系代词“that”。

× I'm a student so I can make a list for the assignments tab that argue with deadlines on it so that I won't be missing any assignments.

✓ I'm a student so I can make a list for the assignments that have deadlines on it so that I won't miss any assignments.

“assignments tab that argue”表达错误，应为“assignments that have”，且“won't be missing”时态不当，应为“won't miss”。

× In the future and he also helped me too.

✓ In the future, it will also help me too.

句子主语错误，“he”应为“it”，且句子缺少连词和时态错误。

× Maintain my GPA.

✓ to maintain my GPA.

缺少不定式“to”引导目的，导致句子不完整。

× Some people don't like making lists because it's limiting them.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because it limits them.

“it's limiting them”时态和结构不当，应改为“it limits them”。

× Of what they can do every day and some people feel really pushed by the list of things that they have to do.

✓ of what they can do every day, and some people feel really pushed by the list of things they have to do.

句子缺少逗号连接，且“that”可省略以使句子更自然。

× Is sometimes in my team motivates them for doing task.

✓ Sometimes, in my team, it motivates them to do tasks.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和正确的动词形式，应调整为完整句子。

× Actually prefer making the list on my paper because.

✓ Actually, I prefer making the list on paper because

缺少主语“I”，且“my paper”应为“paper”，句子不完整。

× If I make the list on my paper, a strengthened my memory while I write it down.

✓ If I make the list on paper, it strengthens my memory while I write it down.

“a strengthened”用法错误，应为“it strengthens”，且“my paper”应为“paper”。

× As I jotted down on the paper.

✓ As I jot down on the paper.

时态错误，“jotted”是过去式，应与上下文时态一致用现在时“jot”。

× And they give myself like a second hand pressure of like doing, finishing, accomplishing all of the task.

✓ And they give me a kind of second-hand pressure to do, finish, and accomplish all of the tasks.

“myself”用法错误，应为宾格“me”，且“all of the task”应为复数“tasks”，动词形式也需调整。