列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且避免无关或重复的信息。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达观点。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list two days before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

建议: 回答缺乏连贯性和完整的句子，表达不清楚。建议先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明列表如何帮助你工作。

示例: Yes, I make a daily schedule to organize my tasks. It works well because it helps me complete many jobs efficiently.

建议: 回答语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they are too busy and feel they don't have time to write them.

建议: 回答中表达不够准确，且理由不够具体。建议明确表达偏好，并给出更合理的理由，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I don't have to use my phone, which can strain my thumb.

× Yes, I'm always two days because I think Michael Lister is a good way to buy something I want and it's very useful.

✓ Yes, I always make a list two days before because I think making a list is a good way to buy something I want and it's very useful.

句中“I’m always two days”时态和表达不正确，应使用一般现在时表达习惯动作，并补充完整句意。建议使用“I always make a list two days before”来表达“我总是在两天前列清单”。

× But I think. It's not. Suitable for those people who don't like this.

✓ But I think it's not suitable for those people who don't like it.

句中“don't like this”中的“this”指代不明确，应该用“it”来指代前文提到的“making a list”。

× I think I will make a daily schedule. I think make a list. It's a good way and very useful for me.

✓ I think I make a daily schedule. I think making a list is a good way and very useful for me.

表达习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，“I think I will make”不符合语境，应改为“I think I make”。另外，“I think make a list”缺少主语和动名词形式，应改为“I think making a list”。

× I can. Do I can do many works?

✓ I can do many tasks.

句子结构混乱，“I can. Do I can do many works?”不符合英语语法，应简化为“I can do many tasks”。“works”用法不当，改为“tasks”更合适。

× In in my opinion, I think someone who don't like making this, it's because they have no time there so busy so. Yeah, another time to make list.

✓ In my opinion, I think some people who don't like making lists are because they are so busy and have no time to make lists.

句中“someone who don't like making this”主谓不一致，应为“some people who don't like making lists”。“there so busy so”表达不清，应改为“are so busy”。整体句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I think I prefer to make a list on my paper because I think it's healthy for my thumb.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on paper because I think it's healthy for my thumb.

“on my paper”中的“my”不合适，通常表达是“on paper”，表示用纸写。

× And, uh, it's cold for our eyes.

✓ And, uh, it's good for our eyes.

“cold for our eyes”表达不正确，应为“good for our eyes”，表示对眼睛有益。