列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I feel like.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单且重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

示例: Sometimes I make a list for my work when the tasks are important because it helps me stay organized. However, for less important tasks, I usually don't make a list.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，无法表达完整意思。建议先给出直接回答，再用简单句子说明原因。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or prefer to remember things mentally.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，逻辑不清。建议先明确表达偏好，再说明原因，避免重复和不连贯。

示例: When I was a student, I preferred making lists on paper because I wasn't very good at using phone apps. Now, I rarely make lists on my phone.

× No, I don't make a list 1. When my when I show pink because I am ENFP so I like to go to some things.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I am ENFP and I like to go to some places.

句子结构混乱，存在重复和无意义的词语。应简化句子，明确表达意思。建议去掉多余部分，保持句子通顺。

× Sometimes I will make a list for my work, because this work is very important, I must do it best.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for my work because this work is very important, and I must do it well.

“will”在此处不合适，表达习惯动作用一般现在时；“do it best”应改为“do it well”，因为“best”是最高级，需有比较对象。

× And sometimes I usually don't make a list for my work because this work is not very important.

✓ Sometimes I don't make a list for my work because this work is not very important.

“sometimes”和“usually”重复使用，语义冲突，应去掉其中一个。

× I think some people don't like make. List. Big 'cause.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they are big.

“don't like make”应改为“don't like making”，动词后需用动名词形式；“List. Big 'cause.”语句不完整，应合并并补充完整。

× And when I was a student, I like. Make I like to make a list on paper because students don't. Don't have the ability to use from where I am university student.

✓ When I was a student, I liked to make lists on paper because students didn't have the ability to use phones. Now I am a university student.

时态不一致，过去时应用liked；句子断裂且表达不清，应重组句子，明确表达意思。

× I rarely make a list on my phone.

✓ I rarely make lists on my phone.

“list”应使用复数形式“lists”，因为这里指的是习惯性行为的复数情况。