列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "make list" instead of "make a list" and "for last month or week" which is unclear. Try to use more precise time expressions and correct article usage. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

示例: I usually don't make a list if I'm just buying one or two essential items. However, when I do my weekly or monthly grocery shopping, I tend to make a list because there are too many things to remember.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear due to grammatical mistakes and missing words, such as "I found a can give me" which is confusing. Try to structure your sentences clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid repetition like "efficient and effective" without explanation.

示例: Yes, I do make plans for my work because they give me a good overview of my daily routines. This helps me to organise my workday better, so I find planning both efficient and effective.

建议: Your answer includes relevant ideas but is hindered by hesitations, filler words, and unclear phrases like "make at least" and "follow the flows." Try to speak more fluently and use correct expressions such as "make a list" and "go with the flow." Also, organise your ideas with linking words for coherence.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and can remember everything. Others are more spontaneous and prefer to go with the flow rather than plan ahead.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing and filler words like "you know." Also, "make a resolution for last month or last year" is unclear. Try to be more precise and concise, and avoid unnecessary fillers to sound more natural.

示例: It depends on the situation. For shopping lists, I usually use my phone because it's easy to carry. However, for more thoughtful lists, like New Year's resolutions, I prefer writing on paper as it allows me to relax and reflect.

× Well, if I plan to buy one or two essential items from shops, then I usually don't make list.

✓ Well, if I plan to buy one or two essential items from shops, then I usually don't make a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article causes a singular and plural issue.

× However, if I need to do grocery shopping for last month or week, then I tend to make a list because there are just too many things to remember.

✓ However, if I need to do grocery shopping for the last month or week, then I tend to make a list because there are just too many things to remember.

The phrase 'last month or week' refers to specific time periods in the past, so the definite article 'the' is required before 'last month or week' to specify the time frame correctly.

× Well I do do planning for my work because I found a can give me a good overview of my routines as well as I can structure my work day better so I do find its efficient and effective.

✓ Well, I do planning for my work because I found it can give me a good overview of my routines as well as I can structure my work day better, so I do find it efficient and effective.

The phrase 'I found a can give me' is incorrect; 'a' is unnecessary and 'can' should be preceded by 'it' as the subject. Also, 'its' should be 'it' as the pronoun referring to the planning. The sentence needed correction for singular/plural and pronoun usage.

× But I think. You know, certain people, they just have good memories and they have everything in their heart. So then so they don't need to make at least.

✓ But I think, you know, certain people just have good memories and they have everything in their heart. So, they don't need to make at least.

The phrase 'make at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. Also, the sentence structure was fragmented and needed commas for clarity. The preposition 'at least' is misused here.

× However, although I also think some people, they're just, you know, the spontaneous type of person and they tend to follow the flows.

✓ However, I also think some people are just, you know, the spontaneous type of person and they tend to go with the flow.

The phrase 'follow the flows' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'go with the flow'. Also, 'although' is redundant with 'however' and was removed for clarity.

× It depends. If I need to make a list for shopping that I tend to do it on my phone because it's just easy to carry it around.

✓ It depends. If I need to make a list for shopping, I tend to do it on my phone because it's just easy to carry around.

The phrase 'carry it around' is redundant because 'it' is already implied. Also, a comma is needed after 'shopping' to separate clauses properly.

× However, if I need to make a resolution for, you know, last month or last year, I tend to do it on the paper because I have more time to relax, reflect.

✓ However, if I need to make a resolution for, you know, last month or last year, I tend to do it on paper because I have more time to relax and reflect.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on paper' without the definite article. Also, 'relax, reflect' should be connected with 'and' for proper coordination.