列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，影响了表达的清晰度。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意冠词和时态的正确使用。

示例: I usually make a list before shopping because without it, I might forget what to buy. This helps me avoid making extra trips to the store for urgent items.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I always make a list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks. Without a list, it's hard to manage my time and work efficiently.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，表达有些重复。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子结构的完整性。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have few tasks and can remember them easily. Others may avoid lists because they are not attentive and tend to forget tasks anyway.

建议: 回答中表达混乱，语法错误多，逻辑不清。建议简化表达，明确比较纸质和手机列表的优缺点，并使用连贯的句子。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see my tasks clearly. When I use my phone, I often get distracted by other apps.

× I usually make her list before I go shopping because without the list I will forget what I need to buy and what what what should I buy for urgent?

✓ I usually make my list before I go shopping because without the list I will forget what I need to buy and what I should buy urgently.

这里“her list”中的“her”使用错误，应该用“my”表示“我的清单”。另外，“what what what should I buy for urgent?”语序和用词不当，改为“what I should buy urgently”更符合英语表达习惯。

× It's really a waste of time to go back to the shopping malls again to get anything I need need in a short time.

✓ It's really a waste of time to go back to the shopping malls again to get anything I need in a short time.

句中“need need”重复，应删除多余的“need”。

× I think I'm make a list for work every time before I need to do something.

✓ I think I make a list for work every time before I need to do something.

“I'm make”语法错误，应为“I make”，因为这里是一般现在时态，表示习惯动作。

× So something urgent in my occupation is without a list of the work.

✓ So something urgent in my occupation is without a list of the work.

该句语义不清，建议改为“It's hard to handle something urgent in my occupation without a work list.”以表达清楚意思。

× Is it really hard for me to arrange my time and my work worker or disorder?

✓ It is really hard for me to arrange my time and my work properly without a list.

句子结构混乱，“work worker or disorder”不合适，改为“arrange my time and my work properly”更通顺。

× It really helps during my busy time to arrange my ten time well.

✓ It really helps during my busy time to arrange my time well.

“ten time”应为“time”，多余的“ten”是错误的。

× I think it's because they don't have many things to do and they can remember anything they need.

✓ I think it's because they don't have many things to do and they can remember everything they need.

“anything”用在肯定句中不合适，应该用“everything”表示“所有的东西”。

× So it's not necessary for them to make the list, but for some people they just don't pay anything in the attention and just forgot to do something afterwards.

✓ So it's not necessary for them to make a list, but some people just don't pay any attention and just forget to do something afterwards.

“pay anything in the attention”错误，正确表达是“pay any attention”。“forgot”时态应与句子保持一致，改为“forget”。

× I think I prefer to make at least on paper, because I can see clearly the the things I need to do or the things in urgent that I need to finish in a quick time.

✓ I think I prefer to make at least a list on paper, because I can see clearly the things I need to do or the urgent things that I need to finish quickly.

“make at least on paper”缺少名词，应为“make at least a list on paper”。“the the”重复，应删除一个。“things in urgent”应为“urgent things”。“in a quick time”表达不自然，改为“quickly”。

× But what? Why is that the making list on my phone? I just Click to the APB apps that are not necessary instead.

✓ But why is making a list on my phone? I just click on the apps that are not necessary instead.

“But what?”不合适，改为“But why”。“the making list”应为“making a list”。“Click to the APB apps”应为“click on the apps”。