列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but a bit redundant and some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Try to be more concise and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating 'yeah' and 'I do make a list' multiple times. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a detailed shopping list that includes the outfits I want to buy, along with their colors and sizes. This helps me shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid informal phrases like 'you know' and improve sentence structure.

示例: I usually don't have a regular job, but when I babysit, I make a list to keep track of the baby's schedule, such as feeding times, medicine times, and playtime. This helps me manage the tasks effectively.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to organize your points logically. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I feel like' and try to be more precise and concise.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, lists can sometimes cause confusion or get lost, which discourages them from using this method.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I have a bad memory. I use the notes app to record important things like my social media accounts and passport details, which helps me stay organized.

× I keep a long list of shop Ann, the outfits which I want to buy.

✓ I keep a long list of shopping, the outfits which I want to buy.

The phrase 'list of shop Ann' is incorrect; it should be 'list of shopping' or 'list of items to shop'. The error is related to incorrect plural or noun form usage.

× I'd record everything of the outfit colors and the size I want.

✓ I'd record everything about the outfit colors and the sizes I want.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here; 'about' is more appropriate to indicate the content being recorded. Also, 'size' should be plural to match 'colors'.

× Are usually don't do any jobs, but whenever somebody you know gives me a job like for example, you have do a babysitting.

✓ I usually don't do any jobs, but whenever somebody you know gives me a job, for example, babysitting.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'Are' should be 'I'; 'you have do a babysitting' is incorrect and should be 'babysitting'. Also, 'babysitting' is uncountable here, so 'a' is unnecessary.

× So for that I make a list support, you know, according to babies, food time, medicine time, or maybe it's playing time.

✓ So for that, I make a list to support, you know, according to the baby's food time, medicine time, or maybe playtime.

The phrase 'make a list support' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list to support'. Also, 'babies' should be 'baby's' to indicate possession, and 'playing time' is better as 'playtime'.

× I feel like some people doesn't like making lists 'cause maybe they have good memory power and they can remember and sometimes list might also make you more confused, so that might be a reason and sometimes it might get lost as well so that's why people may.

✓ I feel like some people don't like making lists because maybe they have good memory power and they can remember, and sometimes lists might also make you more confused, so that might be a reason, and sometimes they might get lost as well, so that's why people may.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. Pronoun 'it' referring to lists should be 'they'.

× I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The article 'a' is missing before 'list'. This is an article error (ID 22) but also relates to singular/plural usage.

× I usually make note in my sorry list in my node of my phone where I keep record of everything.

✓ I usually make notes in my note app on my phone where I keep a record of everything.

The phrase 'sorry list in my node' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or typo. It should be 'notes in my note app'. Also, 'make note' should be 'make notes', and 'keep record' should be 'keep a record'.

× I have really bad memory.

✓ I have a really bad memory.

The article 'a' is missing before 'really bad memory' because 'memory' is a singular countable noun here.