列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct tenses and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases."

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect them. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and complete all my tasks. It also allows me to schedule what to do at specific times."

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and complete all my tasks. It also allows me to schedule what to do at specific times.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to keep their schedule in their mind. Also, they need to work flexibly, so lists may not suit their style."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to keep their schedule in their mind. Also, they need to work flexibly, so lists may not suit their style.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, say "I usually prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone. For timetables or schedules, I like to use paper, but for quick lists, I use my phone because it is convenient."

示例: I usually prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone. For timetables or schedules, I like to use paper, but for quick lists, I use my phone because it is convenient.

× Yes I do make a list to usually when I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'make' to correctly modify it. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× It had made to remember things and it helped me to not buying unnecessary things.

✓ It helps me remember things and helps me not to buy unnecessary things.

The past perfect 'had made' is incorrect here; present tense 'helps' fits better as the habit is ongoing. Also, 'helped me to not buying' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me not to buy'.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my book that helps me too.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work that helps me too.

The word 'book' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse; 'work' fits the context better. Pronoun usage is incorrect as 'book' does not relate to making lists for work.

× Stay concentrated and it helps me to.

✓ It helps me stay concentrated as well.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb structure. The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence.

× Do all the things and it asked me to Ruby make schedule at what time what should I do and it helped me too.

✓ It helps me do all the things and make a schedule about what I should do at what time, and it helps me too.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× People don't Some people don't like to make lists becauses they.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they

The phrase 'People don't Some people don't' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'Some people don't'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× Usually kept their schedule or Dick's schedule on their mind and.

✓ Usually keep their schedule or their own schedule in their mind.

The verb 'kept' should be 'keep' to match present tense. 'Dick's schedule' is likely a mishearing or error; 'their own schedule' is appropriate. Also, 'on their mind' should be 'in their mind'. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be connected properly.

× Another reason is that they need to do work flexing.

✓ Another reason is that they need to work flexibly.

The phrase 'do work flexing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'work flexibly' to express the idea of flexible work.

× Usually I preferred to make a list on both paper and on phone.

✓ Usually I prefer to make a list on both paper and on my phone.

The past tense 'preferred' is incorrect here as the statement is about a habitual action; present tense 'prefer' is appropriate. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone'.

× If I am making the timetable Will's schedule.

✓ If I am making the timetable or schedule.

'Will's schedule' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error. The phrase should be 'timetable or schedule' to make sense.

× I would like to make it in the paper and sometimes I usually make in the phone because it is easy.

✓ I would like to make it on paper and sometimes I usually make it on the phone because it is easy.

The correct preposition with 'paper' and 'phone' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'make' should be followed by 'it' for clarity.