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Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
To be honest, I really make a list because when I have to buy something, I usually think about this, think about this and do not remember to write downs or draw down anything because I think is it cost me a lot of times.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I'm very busy and I have a lot of tasks to accomplish, so I usually have to write down some things that I have to finish. In the two finished or things on times and not to forget anything.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think the main reasons why some people are hate a making list because is 'cause lot of times I end our busy life, people have a lot of tasks and things to do so they believe that making list can cost them a lot of times.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually carry my phone with me, so it's very convenient for me too. 2 are when is very convenient for me when I have to make a list.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 50.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý tưởng không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn.
示例: Actually, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I try to remember what I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời còn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.
示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. It helps me finish them on time and not forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác, làm cho ý tưởng khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và tránh lặp từ.
示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time, especially when they are very busy.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 55.0建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng ý nhưng câu trả lời có phần lặp lại và không mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.
示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's very convenient whenever I need to add something.
语法
× I think the main reasons why some people are hate a making list because is 'cause lot of times I end our busy life, people have a lot of tasks and things to do so they believe that making list can cost them a lot of times.
✓ I think the main reason why some people hate making lists is because, in our busy lives, people have a lot of tasks and things to do, so they believe that making lists can cost them a lot of time.
The phrase 'are hate a making list' is incorrect because 'hate' is a verb that should not be preceded by 'are' and 'making' should not have an article 'a' before it. The correct form is 'hate making lists'. Also, 'is 'cause lot of times I end our busy life' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'is because, in our busy lives'. Additionally, 'making list' should be plural 'making lists' to match the general statement. The sentence structure and word choice were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.
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