列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为简洁，但表达不够自然，句子结构略显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list to make sure I don't forget anything I need.

建议: 回答中使用了口语缩写“'cause”，显得不够正式。句子结构简单，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更正式的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks, and it works very well.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议理清思路，使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult to organize their tasks, or they prefer to work spontaneously without planning.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子断裂影响理解。建议使用完整句子，表达清楚自己的偏好和原因。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to carry around than paper lists.

× I think some people don't know how to make a list and some of them may not do the leaders to really begin to. Do the job. So most of them don't like making lists.

✓ I think some people don't know how to make a list and some of them may not do the leaders to really begin to do the job. So most of them don't like making lists.

句子结构混乱，'Do the job.' 作为独立句子不完整，应与前句合并，形成完整句子。建议将其合并为一个完整句子，避免断句错误。

× I prefer to make your list on my phone be 'cause it is convenient to me and if I will. Make a list of my paper. It is not easy for me to take it anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because it is convenient for me and if I make a list on paper, it is not easy for me to take it anywhere.

代词使用错误，'your list' 应为 'my list'，且句子中断句错误，'if I will. Make a list of my paper.' 不通顺，应改为 'if I make a list on paper'。建议注意代词的一致性和句子完整性。