列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons and avoid unnecessary words. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and manage my budget effectively.

建议: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Please respond directly to the question with complete sentences and explain how making a list helps your work. Avoid irrelevant or unclear words.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, and it helps me stay organized and complete my duties on time.

建议: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly using proper sentence structure and linking words. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they are often busy. Also, some individuals prefer to rely on their good memory instead.

建议: Your answer is mostly unintelligible. Please give a clear and direct response stating your preference and reasons. Use complete sentences and avoid irrelevant words.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because my phone is often busy or unavailable, so paper is more reliable for me.

× It's very helpful for me to remember or purchased roll items then.

✓ It's very helpful for me to remember or purchase all items then.

The verb 'purchased' is incorrectly used here as a past participle; the base form 'purchase' should be used after 'to' as it is part of the infinitive verb form 'to purchase'.

× Yes, I make it a list in my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list at my work.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'work' here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the place where the list is made.

× I do doing bark.

✓ I do work.

The phrase 'do doing bark' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be corrected to 'I do work' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× And sometimes a I. Aye.

✓ And sometimes I do.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; correcting it to 'And sometimes I do' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Because I am busy, persons do not get time, so some people's down like making list and and also some peoples have a higher memory power.

✓ Because I am busy, people do not get time, so some people don't like making lists and also some people have a better memory.

The word 'persons' is incorrect in this context; 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Some people's down like' is incorrect and should be 'some people don't like'. Also, 'peoples' should be 'people'. The phrase 'higher memory power' is better expressed as 'better memory'.

× And I prefer a 4B cause a phone is always. Jennifer always for. Baking. So. I prefer for.

✓ I prefer paper because a phone is always busy. So, I prefer paper.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like '4B', 'Jennifer', and 'baking' which seem out of context. Replacing with 'paper' and correcting the sentence structure clarifies the meaning. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.