列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to buy more than I need. Once I finish buying everything on my list, I sometimes browse other stores, but I try to avoid unnecessary purchases.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's remind me' nên là 'it reminds me'.

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it reminds me of important tasks and helps me avoid missing anything. I find writing lists very convenient and useful.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously. Also, making lists can feel like a pressure or a rule, which some find stressful.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I usually write my to-do list and post it on my desk. This way, I can easily keep track of my tasks throughout the day.

× Yes, I am a overconsumption person.

✓ Yes, I am an overconsumption person.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'overconsumption'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× when I finished all my list I wanna look at I wanna look at any store or any products because I know that I will bite it even those I don't really need it in my life.

✓ when I finish all my list I want to look at any store or any products because I know that I will buy them even though I don't really need them in my life.

The verb tense should be present tense 'finish' to match the habitual action. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Bite' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'buy'. 'Those' should be 'though' to express contrast. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'products'.

× when I finished all my list

✓ when I finish my whole list

The phrase 'all my list' is incorrect because 'list' is singular; 'whole list' or 'all of my list' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I do make a list when I have to do works because it's remind me an I will be not miss any worse that important so.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I have work because it reminds me and I will not miss any important work.

'Works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here. 'It's remind me' should be 'it reminds me' for subject-verb agreement. 'I will be not miss' is incorrect; correct form is 'I will not miss'. 'Any worse that important' is incorrect; should be 'any important work'.

× So I think writing list to do is very convenient and very useful.

✓ So I think writing a to-do list is very convenient and very useful.

The phrase 'writing list to do' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'writing a to-do list'.

× I think because they don't want to make a rules, they just want to make an everything randomly and easier for them.

✓ I think it's because they don't want to make rules; they just want to do everything randomly and make it easier for them.

'Make a rules' is incorrect; 'rules' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Make an everything' is incorrect; 'do everything' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Making lists is maybe 'cause some forge for them and they feel pressure when they have to do the list.

✓ Making lists may be hard for them and they feel pressure when they have to make a list.

'Some forge for them' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'may be hard for them' fits the context. 'Do the list' should be 'make a list'.

× So some people choose not to writing a list because.

✓ So some people choose not to write a list because.

After 'choose not to', the base form of the verb 'write' should be used, not the gerund 'writing'.

× I refer ticking. List on my paper because I is.

✓ I prefer ticking the list on my paper because I am.

'Refer ticking' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer ticking'. 'I is' is incorrect; it should be 'I am'.

× Because I often rise my list on the To Do List not and I will post it on my desk so it's very easy for me.

✓ Because I often write my list on the To Do List app and I will post it on my desk so it's very easy for me.

'Rise my list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'write'. 'To Do List not' is unclear; likely 'To Do List app' or similar is intended.

× When I look at my desk I can easily keep track with.

✓ When I look at my desk I can easily keep track of it.

The phrase 'keep track with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'keep track of'.