列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific reasons why you make a list when shopping. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the important items I need to buy. For example, when I travel abroad, I prepare a list to ensure I don't forget essential things. This method saves me time and reduces stress.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Please answer directly whether you make a list for your work and explain how it helps you. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples related to your studies.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my study tasks because they help me stay organised. For instance, I list my assignments and deadlines, which motivates me to complete my work on time and improves my learning.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Explain the reason more naturally and avoid repetition.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily. Therefore, they feel it is unnecessary to carry paper or write down tasks.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Sometimes, I forget to bring paper at home, which causes me to miss important things. Using my phone helps me avoid this problem.

× Yes, it is very important when I am going to inside outside the country.

✓ Yes, it is very important when I am going inside or outside the country.

The phrase 'going to inside outside the country' is incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'going inside' or 'going outside' the country. Use 'inside' and 'outside' as prepositions without 'to' in this context.

× So I easily checked the list because sometimes I cannot remember the important things.

✓ So I easily check the list because sometimes I cannot remember the important things.

The verb 'checked' is in past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'check' should be used.

× I have lost the memory sometimes, so it is beneficial.

✓ I sometimes forget things, so it is beneficial.

The phrase 'I have lost the memory' is unnatural. 'Forget things' is the correct expression. Also, 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb for clarity.

× Yes, I am a student so I set the temp table list with.

✓ Yes, I am a student so I set a temporary table list.

The phrase 'set the temp table list with' is incorrect. 'Set a temporary table list' is the correct phrase without 'with'.

× It helps to improve my motivators skills and also knowledge skills when I am a related to their work.

✓ It helps to improve my motivation skills and knowledge skills when I am related to their work.

The word 'motivators' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'motivation'. Also, 'a related' is incorrect; it should be 'related' without 'a'.

× So it is important for beneficial.

✓ So it is important and beneficial.

The phrase 'important for beneficial' is incorrect. Use 'important and beneficial' to connect two adjectives properly.

× Because some people easily remember the things, they cannot forget the things, so they cannot carry any kind of paper and make any kind of list.

✓ Because some people easily remember things, they do not forget things, so they do not carry any kind of paper or make any kind of list.

The phrase 'cannot forget the things' is better expressed as 'do not forget things'. Also, 'and' should be 'or' to indicate alternatives.

× I prefer the listing phone because phone is always with me.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because the phone is always with me.

The phrase 'the listing phone' is incorrect. Use 'making lists on my phone'. Also, 'phone is always with me' needs 'the' before 'phone'.

× Sometimes I for get paper in my home so also I forgot that important things.

✓ Sometimes I forget paper at home, so I also forget important things.

The phrase 'forget paper in my home' is incorrect; use 'forget paper at home'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense. 'That important things' should be 'important things' without 'that'.