列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
I normally don't make a list when I go shopping because I like to go to the shopping mall when I just want to buy one thing and if I see anything else that I like I will usually also buy it as well.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I don't make a list for my work because I'm still in school, but sometimes I use a noting app to take down notes and make sure all of my studying schedules are on time.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think some people don't like making lists because it takes time and is not that fun just looking at this and sometimes you just don't want to make less and maybe just want to go on a shopping spree and if you find something that you think will be good and I'll help you, then you buy it. That is what I normally do.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer making a list on my phone instead of paper. Because was phone I can bring it around easily. For example, if I use paper, then I still have to bring a paper with me and it can sometimes be annoying or I might lose it because papers are more small and.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 70.0建议: 你的回答有點冗長且語句不夠流暢。建議你直接回答問題，並用連接詞使句子更有條理，例如使用"because"或"so"來連接原因和結果。
示例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I often buy only one item, but if I see something interesting, I might buy it too.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答中有語法錯誤，且表達不夠清晰。建議你使用正確的詞彙，如"note-taking app"，並且句子結構要更完整。
示例: I don't make a list for work because I'm still a student, but I sometimes use a note-taking app to organize my study schedule.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: 你的回答過於冗長且有語法錯誤，建議你簡潔明瞭地表達意見，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。
示例: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and feels boring. They prefer to shop freely and buy things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有語法錯誤且句子不完整。建議你使用完整句子並注意語法，例如"because"後面接完整句子。
示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to carry and I won't lose it like paper lists, which can be small and easy to misplace.
语法
× I prefer making a list on my phone instead of paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone instead of paper.
The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making'. Using 'to make' is more standard and formal in this context.
× Because was phone I can bring it around easily.
✓ Because with my phone, I can bring it around easily.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing preposition. 'Because was phone' is ungrammatical. It should be 'Because with my phone' to indicate the reason properly.
× if I use paper, then I still have to bring a paper with me and it can sometimes be annoying or I might lose it because papers are more small and.
✓ If I use paper, then I still have to bring a piece of paper with me and it can sometimes be annoying or I might lose it because papers are smaller.
The word 'paper' is uncountable, so 'a paper' is incorrect. It should be 'a piece of paper' to refer to a single sheet. Also, 'more small' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'smaller'. The sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.
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