列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Try to make your sentences more natural and clear by using correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, instead of 'organize it that time,' say 'organize my shopping efficiently.' Also, keep your answer concise and avoid unnecessary words.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me organize my purchases and save time.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, explain why you make lists for work and how it helps you manage tasks. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete in the afternoon. Making a list helps me prioritize my jobs and manage my time effectively.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give specific reasons why some people dislike making lists. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your ideas logically. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like '107 or reasons' and 'the time is cannot bug.'

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Also, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains unclear words like 'make wheat.' Try to give a clear preference and explain why, using complete sentences and correct vocabulary. Avoid hesitation sounds like 'Uh' and ensure your answer is natural and coherent.

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier for me to write and see everything at once.

× Yes, I always make a list because it is important for me to organize it that time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list because it is important for me to organize my time.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'time'. The correct possessive pronoun 'my' should be used to indicate ownership of the time being organized.

× Yes, when I work I always make a list because I work afternoons in Japanese in Japan, so I should organize a time because I worries have a lot of jobs so I should primary. To do it.

✓ Yes, when I work I always make a list because I work in the afternoons in Japan, so I should organize my time because I worry about having a lot of jobs, so I should prioritize doing them.

The preposition 'in' is missing before 'the afternoons'. 'Japanese' is unnecessary here and should be removed. 'Organize a time' is incorrect; it should be 'organize my time'. 'I worries' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'I worry'. 'Primary' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prioritize'. The sentence is also fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× 107 or reasons. One reason is that time is very important. The time is cannot bug, so we should be important. Some of the time. I'll second reason is that. 2.

✓ There are many reasons. One reason is that time is very important. Time cannot be wasted, so we should value it. Another reason is...

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. '107 or reasons' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'many reasons'. 'The time is cannot bug' is incorrect; it should be 'Time cannot be wasted'. 'I'll second reason is that. 2.' is incomplete and unclear. The sentences need to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, I prefer to. I prefer paper because. It is easy for me too. Make wheat.

✓ Uh, I prefer paper because it is easy for me to use.

The phrase 'I prefer to' is incomplete and should be 'I prefer paper'. 'Make wheat' is incorrect and likely a mishearing; it should be 'to use'. The sentence also has unnecessary periods breaking the flow.