列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够流畅，句子结构不完整，且内容不够具体。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me stay organized and not forget anything important. For example, last week I had only one hour to shop, so my list helped me buy everything quickly and efficiently.

建议: 回答中断且重复，表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，并提供具体例子说明效果。

示例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, last month I completed an important experiment on time thanks to my detailed list.

建议: 回答较为完整，但用词和表达可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并适当丰富内容。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming to organize tasks. They might find it tedious to track deadlines and priorities. Also, some prefer to let things happen naturally without too much planning.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有重复和不自然的地方。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并补充具体优点。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can check it anytime and anywhere. Also, it's easy to share my plans with friends through apps.

× Yes, I usually make a list of the items that I wanted to buy before I go shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the items that I want to buy before I go shopping.

这里的时间是现在习惯性的动作，应该用一般现在时，不能用过去时。将'wanted'改为'want'符合时态一致性。

× For example, last week I have only one.

✓ For example, last week I had only one hour.

句子结构不完整，缺少时间状语和宾语，且时态应为过去时。补充完整句子并使用过去时态。

× I had only one hour for shopping and due to.

✓ I had only one hour for shopping due to some urgent matters.

句子不完整，缺少原因部分，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, I generally have a list for my work and this helps me to.

✓ Yes, I generally have a list for my work and this helps me to stay organized.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，需补充完整。

× For instance, last month, I, I had a, I had an experiment thanks to my to do list.

✓ For instance, last month, I had an experiment thanks to my to-do list.

句子中重复且断断续续，需简化并连贯表达。

× I finished the experiment with experiment.

✓ I finished the experiment successfully.

句子重复且不通顺，需用合适的词汇表达完成实验的意思。

× They might be too lazy to keep track of the deadline and priorities.

✓ They might be too lazy to keep track of deadlines and priorities.

deadline应使用复数形式，且与priorities并列，保持一致。

× Also, some prefer to let things go happen naturally without interfering too much.

✓ Also, some prefer to let things happen naturally without interfering too much.

短语'let things go happen'是不正确的，正确表达是'let things happen'。

× I prefer making plans on my phone because phone is convenient and I can check it at any time and any, any place.

✓ I prefer making plans on my phone because the phone is convenient and I can check it at any time and any place.

在提到特定物品时，phone前应加定冠词'the'。

× Also, I can share my plans with my friends MOOC easily.

✓ Also, I can easily share my plans with my friends on MOOC.

句子结构不清晰，'MOOC'前应加介词'on'，并调整副词位置使句子通顺。