列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more complete and coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain how you make your list and why it helps you.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone or on a piece of paper. This way, when I go shopping, I can easily check the items I need without spending too much time thinking about them.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to speak in full sentences and explain clearly how making a list helps you at work. Use linking words to organise your ideas logically.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised. I separate urgent tasks from less important ones, so I can focus on what needs to be done first.

建议: Your answer has several pronunciation and grammar errors that make it hard to understand. Try to use simple, clear sentences and explain your ideas fully. For example, mention reasons why some people avoid lists and what they do instead.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to work on tasks as they come without planning ahead.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has some grammar mistakes. Try to give a full, clear response with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I prefer to make my list on my phone because I always have it with me. If I write on paper, I might lose it, so using my phone is more convenient.

× I'm I tend to.

✓ I tend to.

The phrase 'I'm I tend to' is a sentence structure error caused by the unnecessary repetition of the subject and verb. The correct form is simply 'I tend to.' This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Make my list on my phone or just on that piece of paper so when it's time to go shopping, I just take my lease and start by.

✓ I make my list on my phone or just on a piece of paper, so when it's time to go shopping, I just take my list and start with the products that I need.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb in the first part. Also, 'lease' is a typo for 'list'. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and correct word usage.

× Or the product that I need.

✓ I start with the products that I need.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. The correction adds the subject 'I' and verb 'start' to form a complete sentence.

× And I don't spend too much time just thinking what I had to buy.

✓ And I don't spend too much time just thinking about what I have to buy.

The phrase 'thinking what I had to buy' is incorrect because it lacks the preposition 'about' and uses past tense 'had' instead of present tense 'have' to match the context.

× Because it helped me to be organized.

✓ Because it helps me to be organized.

The verb 'helped' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate.

× In. Each relic words because I separate.

✓ In each work-related task, I separate them because...

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Relic words' seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correction assumes the intended meaning is about organizing work tasks.

× What are the urgent? That I have to do virgin taesan? Which ones are not?

✓ Which ones are urgent and need to be done, and which ones are not?

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'virgin taesan'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× I teen some people don't like to make a list.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a list.

'Teen' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'think'. Correcting it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Because they team that is always of time.

✓ Because they feel that it is always a waste of time.

'Team' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'feel', and the phrase 'is always of time' is incorrect. The correction provides the intended meaning with proper vocabulary and structure.

× So instead of making a list they just work on the tasaday have to do.

✓ So instead of making a list, they just work on the tasks they have to do.

The original sentence contains a typo 'tasaday' and lacks a comma after the introductory phrase. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and correctness.

× Because I. I my phone keep all the time and if I write on a paper. I will lose it. Because.

✓ Because I keep my phone with me all the time, and if I write on paper, I might lose it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and incomplete thoughts. The correction forms a complete, coherent sentence with proper structure.