列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason or example using linking words.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For instance, I often pick up items that catch my eye while browsing.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organise your ideas logically and use correct tenses. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain clearly whether making lists works for you or not.

示例: I don't usually make lists for my work because I find it hard to stick to them. When I was a child, my father made schedules for me, but they didn't work because I often ignored them.

建议: Your answer is somewhat vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Avoid informal phrases and be more specific.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and not follow strict rules. For example, they might enjoy making decisions as they go rather than planning everything in advance.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and clarify your points. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily access them. Moreover, if I use paper, I might lose it, which is inconvenient.

× Actually I have never make a list when I going to shop because I'm not at this self displaying person.

✓ Actually I have never made a list when I go shopping because I'm not this kind of self-disciplined person.

The verb 'make' should be in the past participle form 'made' after 'have never'. 'Going to shop' should be 'go shopping' to use the correct verb form. 'At this self displaying person' is incorrect; it should be 'this kind of self-disciplined person' to convey the intended meaning.

× So I just like just working working in the random by something that I saw and I want to buy it when I saw it.

✓ So I just like working randomly, buying something that I see and want to buy when I see it.

The phrase 'working working in the random' is incorrect; 'working randomly' is the correct adverb form. Also, 'that I saw' and 'when I saw it' should be in present tense 'see' to maintain consistency.

× As I said before, I'm not a kind of like self disciplined person so I'm not usually to do our latest for when I was dropped.

✓ As I said before, I'm not the kind of self-disciplined person, so I don't usually make lists when I go shopping.

'I'm not usually to do' is incorrect; the correct modal verb usage is 'I don't usually make'. 'Our latest for when I was dropped' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'make lists when I go shopping' to fit context.

× But when I was a kid, my father write list started scheduled less for me.

✓ But when I was a kid, my father wrote lists and scheduled tasks for me.

The verb 'write' should be in past tense 'wrote' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Started scheduled less' is incorrect; corrected to 'scheduled tasks' for clarity.

× But it doesn't work because I go to sleep. I went to sleep.

✓ But it didn't work because I went to sleep.

The tense should be consistent past tense 'didn't work' and 'went to sleep' to describe past events.

× I think there's maybe something like me because I just like to do something.

✓ I think there are maybe people like me because I just like to do things.

'There's' is singular but refers to plural 'something like me'; corrected to 'there are'. 'Something' changed to 'people' and 'do something' to 'do things' for clarity.

× I don't like to be in the rule.

✓ I don't like to be under rules.

'In the rule' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'under rules' or 'under rules' without 'the'.

× I want to follow my step to continue my life.

✓ I want to follow my own path to continue my life.

'My step' is incorrect; 'my own path' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× For me, I will prefer to make a list on the phone is more convenient for me to see that.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on the phone because it is more convenient for me to see.

'Prefer to make a list on the phone is more convenient' is incorrect structure; corrected to 'prefer to make a list on the phone because it is more convenient'.

× In addition, if I make a list on the paper, I probably will last the paper.

✓ In addition, if I make a list on paper, I will probably lose the paper.

'Last the paper' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'lose the paper'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'.