列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に対して直接的ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。文章を簡潔にし、文法を正しく使うこと、また接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because there are many items I need to buy. If I don't make a list, I often forget some things.

建议: 回答が断片的で意味が不明瞭な部分があります。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果を具体的に説明する練習をしましょう。また、文をつなげるための接続詞を使うことも重要です。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. It works very well and improves my efficiency.

建议: 意見を述べていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、文をつなげて論理的に説明する練習をしましょう。

示例: I prefer making lists, but I think some people find it troublesome because it takes time to prepare them. Sometimes, they just don't want to bother.

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。理由を述べる際は、接続詞を使い、文をつなげて明確に説明する練習をしましょう。

示例: These days, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can check the list anytime, unlike paper lists which are less convenient.

× Sometimes I when I go to shopping.

✓ Sometimes when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without the preposition 'to'.

× There's so many things that I need to buy, so if I don't make a list, I will forget what I should buy.

✓ There are so many things that I need to buy, so if I don't make a list, I will forget what I should buy.

'There is' should be used with singular nouns, while 'there are' is used with plural nouns. Since 'things' is plural, 'there are' is correct.

× Yes, I make a list on my job.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my job.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'for' is the appropriate preposition to indicate purpose or relation.

× Because. It is fitting necessary to complete my task?

✓ Because it is necessary to complete my task.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an incorrect word 'fitting'. It should be a complete sentence without a question mark.

× It works. It works very well and it helps me my work. To complete efficiency. Come.

✓ It works very well and helps me complete my work efficiently.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They should be combined into a coherent sentence with correct word order.

× I guess some people thinks making Alisa is troublesome.

✓ I guess some people think making a list is troublesome.

The verb 'think' should agree with the plural subject 'people', so 'think' is correct instead of 'thinks'. Also, 'Alisa' is a typo for 'a list'.

× An it is. Taking time to make up. Least.

✓ And it takes time to make up a list.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'An' should be 'And', and 'Taking' should be 'it takes'. 'Least' should be 'a list'.

× Some day doesn't want to make any.

✓ Some people don't want to make any.

'Some day' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'some people'. Also, 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with the plural subject.

× These days I preferred to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient for me.

✓ These days I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient for me.

The present tense 'prefer' should be used to describe current habits, not the past tense 'preferred'.

× Because the phone we always Kelly Ann, we can check whatever we want.

✓ Because we always carry the phone, we can check whatever we want.

The phrase 'the phone we always Kelly Ann' is incorrect. It should be 'we always carry the phone'.

× But the list but the paper is. More lazy to write it down.

✓ But writing a list on paper is more troublesome.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'more lazy' incorrectly. 'More lazy' is not appropriate; 'more troublesome' or 'more inconvenient' fits better.