列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference with specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases like 'kept my world'.

示例: I don't always make a shopping list because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I prefer to note down items on my mobile phone since I always carry it with me, making it convenient to check my list anytime.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Begin with a direct response, then explain your situation clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't make work lists at the moment because I am a student and don't have a job. However, if I start working in the future, I will definitely make lists to stay organized.

建议: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'making live' and 'waste of time moving ahead'. Try to use clear and correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your points logically and provide specific reasons.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time and requires extra effort. Additionally, they feel confident in memorizing tasks without needing a list.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' properly to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's simple and convenient. However, if my phone is unavailable or out of battery, I make lists on paper instead.

× I usually kept my world with me

✓ I usually keep my world with me

The verb 'kept' is the past tense and past participle form of 'keep'. Here, the present tense is required because the sentence describes a habitual action. So, 'keep' should be used instead of 'kept'.

× I make the list because I think it's a waste of time

✓ I make a list because I think it's a waste of time

The definite article 'the' is used when referring to a specific item known to both speaker and listener. Here, the sentence talks about making a list in general, so the indefinite article 'a' is appropriate.

× I usually don't make the list for work

✓ I usually don't make a list for work

Similar to the previous explanation, 'a list' is general here, so the indefinite article 'a' should be used instead of 'the'.

× I don't have a work

✓ I don't have work

The noun 'work' is uncountable when referring to employment in general, so it should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'.

× if in future I get to work I will surely make a list

✓ if in the future I get a job I will surely make a list

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article. Also, 'get to work' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'get a job' to express employment. The future tense 'will surely make' is correct.

× Some people don't like making live because they think it's just waste of time moving ahead

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it's just a waste of time moving ahead

The word 'live' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'waste of time' needs the article 'a' before it.

× it's just waste of time moving ahead

✓ it's just a waste of time moving ahead

The phrase 'waste of time' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'waste' to be grammatically correct.

× some people also think they can memorize the thing better than making list

✓ some people also think they can memorize things better than making lists

'The thing' is incorrect here; it should be plural 'things' to refer generally. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to be grammatically correct.

× I like to make the list on mobile phone because I think it's quite simple, easy

✓ I like to make lists on my mobile phone because I think it's quite simple and easy

'The list' should be plural 'lists' to generalize. Also, 'mobile phone' needs the possessive pronoun 'my'. The adjectives 'simple' and 'easy' should be connected with 'and'.

× if sometimes I don't have my phone or my phone is discharged, so I like to make my list on the paper

✓ if sometimes I don't have my phone or my phone is discharged, I like to make my list on paper

The preposition 'on' before 'paper' is correct, but the definite article 'the' is unnecessary here. Also, the conjunction 'so' is redundant after 'if' clause and should be removed.