列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition like 'low low memory' and use proper sentence structure. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a reason with linking words.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and explain how making lists helps your work. Avoid unclear phrases like 'it really did password form'.

示例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because I tend to forget tasks. Making lists helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建议: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'weaken consumer time'. Provide a clear reason and explain it logically.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and effort. They prefer to remember things mentally so that they can spend their time on other activities.

建议: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentences. Avoid repetition and explain your preference with specific reasons.

示例: I prefer both paper and phone lists. When I go outside, I use my phone because it's always with me. However, for long-term plans, I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to review.

× Yes, I have low low memory.

✓ Yes, I have a poor memory.

The phrase 'low low memory' is incorrect. 'Memory' is uncountable here and should be preceded by an adjective like 'poor' to describe it properly. Also, 'low low' is repetitive and incorrect.

× That's why I used to remember things by making a list when I go for shop in the market.

✓ That's why I remember things by making a list when I go shopping in the market.

The phrase 'used to remember' is incorrect here because it implies a past habit which contradicts the present tense 'when I go'. Also, 'go for shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I often make list for my work because I have less memory and I forget easily.

✓ Yes, I often make lists for my work because I have poor memory and I forget easily.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'less memory' is incorrect; 'poor memory' is the correct expression.

× That's why I make.

✓ That's why I make lists.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'lists' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I like to make list on my work and it really did password form.

✓ I like to make lists for my work and it really helps me stay organized.

'Make list on my work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for'. The phrase 'did password form' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error; it is replaced with a meaningful phrase.

× Because it consume lots of time and effort.

✓ Because it consumes a lot of time and effort.

The verb 'consume' needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' by adding 's'. Also, 'lots of' is informal; 'a lot of' is more appropriate here.

× If we are remembered the things instead of making list, we can weaken consumer time and efforts in other activity.

✓ If we remember things instead of making lists, we can save time and effort for other activities.

'Are remembered' is passive and incorrect here; active voice 'remember' is correct. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'Weaken consumer time and efforts' is incorrect; 'save time and effort' is the correct expression. 'Other activity' should be plural 'other activities'.

× I prefer both because when I have to go outside then I like to.

✓ I prefer both because when I have to go outside, I like to use them.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'use them' clarifies the meaning.

× I like to make list on my phone because I always get it with me and on paper when I like to.

✓ I like to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, and on paper when I want to.

'Make list on my phone' should be 'make lists on my phone'. 'Get it with me' is incorrect; 'have it with me' is correct. 'When I like to' is informal and unclear; 'when I want to' is better.

× When I like to make long time plans then I would like to make list on paper.

✓ When I want to make long-term plans, I prefer to make lists on paper.

'Like to make long time plans' should be 'want to make long-term plans'. 'Make list on paper' should be 'make lists on paper'. Also, 'would like to' is less appropriate here than 'prefer to' for habitual preference.