列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I rely on my memory. However, I think making a list is a good idea as it helps to organise the shopping and avoid forgetting items.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repetition and check grammar for smoother delivery.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work in the morning. This helps me stay organised and complete my tasks more efficiently, which leads to a more professional and satisfying outcome.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical mistakes. Avoid making negative assumptions like calling people lazy. Instead, provide a balanced opinion with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on their memory. However, this can lead to forgetting important tasks, so making a list is usually more reliable.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Use a clear topic sentence and link your ideas smoothly. Also, watch out for repetition and grammar mistakes to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I used to prefer making lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient. Whether I'm at the office or outside, I can easily check and update my list on my phone.

× No, I don't make a list when I show up I think I will use my branch remember it.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop; I think I will use my brain to remember it.

The word 'show' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'shop'. Also, 'branch' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'brain'. This is a vocabulary error but also relates to verb usage. The sentence also needs punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× But I think making this is a good example and a good way to do the shopping.

✓ But I think making a list is a good example and a good way to do the shopping.

The phrase 'making this' is unclear; it should specify 'making a list' to clarify the subject. Using the gerund 'making' is correct here, but the object must be clear.

× Yeah, I do make a list when I work in the morning.

✓ Yeah, I do make a list before I work in the morning.

The phrase 'when I work in the morning' is less precise than 'before I work in the morning' to indicate the timing of making the list. The sentence structure can be improved for clarity.

× So I make a list before I go to work.

✓ So I make a list before I go to work.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I think is very good way to to work more professional and more beautiful finish to work.

✓ I think it is a very good way to work more professionally and to finish work better.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it'. 'Professional' should be the adverb 'professionally' to modify 'work'. 'More beautiful finish to work' is awkward; 'to finish work better' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Because I think some people are just lazy. They just want to make a list.

✓ Because I think some people are just lazy. They just don't want to make a list.

The original sentence contradicts the meaning; if people are lazy, they wouldn't want to make a list. The correction reflects the intended meaning.

× Therefore there can use the brand that can remember everything.

✓ Therefore, they can use the brain that can remember everything.

'There can use the brand' is incorrect. The subject pronoun 'they' is needed, and 'brand' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'brain'. The sentence also needs a comma after 'Therefore'.

× But the true is you can not remember everything if you don't make award, if you don't make it list.

✓ But the truth is you cannot remember everything if you don't make a note, if you don't make a list.

'The true' should be 'the truth'. 'Make award' is incorrect; it should be 'make a note'. 'Make it list' should be 'make a list'. These are errors in word choice and article usage.

× I prefer to make a list of my paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing on paper.

× It was before but but now I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I used to prefer paper, but now I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The original sentence is unclear and has repeated words 'but but'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I think it's more convenient no matter I am in office or I am outside so I can look at my phone to do the next list.

✓ I think it's more convenient whether I am in the office or outside, so I can look at my phone to check the list.

'No matter' is incorrectly used; 'whether' is appropriate here. 'In office' needs the article 'the'. 'Do the next list' is awkward; 'check the list' is clearer. The sentence also benefits from commas for clarity.