列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use simple, correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to improve coherence and check your grammar, especially verb forms and prepositions.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks before starting my workday, depending on my workload. I find it really helpful because it allows me to prioritise important activities and stay organised throughout the day. This way, I can manage my time more efficiently.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to use simpler sentences and correct word choices to express your opinion clearly and logically.

示例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises in their daily life. For example, when shopping, they might find it more exciting to decide what to buy on the spot rather than following a strict plan.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use clear and correct sentences, and avoid confusing expressions to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I prefer to make my list on paper because it's easier to keep track of it physically. For example, when I go shopping, having a paper list allows me to quickly check items without unlocking my phone. Also, using paper helps me avoid distractions from notifications.

× Hi, will surely I lose a lips when I decided to go out?

✓ Hi, will I surely lose my lips when I decide to go out?

The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the subject 'I' and then the base verb 'lose'. Also, 'decided' should be in present tense 'decide' to match the modal 'will'. 'A lips' is incorrect because 'lips' is plural and does not take 'a'. The correct possessive pronoun 'my' is used instead.

× Hi, will surely I lose a lips when I decided to go out?

✓ Hi, will I surely lose my lips when I decide to go out?

The phrase 'a lips' is incorrect because 'lips' is plural and cannot be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is 'my lips' to indicate possession.

× For shopping in particularly because with this activity I can avoid a spend a lot of time preparing the things. Choosing.

✓ Particularly for shopping, because with this activity I can avoid spending a lot of time preparing things and choosing.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'In particularly' should be 'particularly'. 'Avoid a spend' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid spending'. 'The things' is better as 'things' without 'the'. The fragment 'Choosing.' is incomplete and should be connected to the previous sentence.

× Yes, I usually make a list of guards before starting my work day depending on my work load.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of tasks before starting my work day depending on my workload.

The word 'guards' is likely a mistake and should be 'tasks' to make sense. Also, 'work load' should be one word 'workload'.

× I find it really helpful because it allows me to prioritize important activities under stay organized throughout the day.

✓ I find it really helpful because it allows me to prioritize important activities and stay organized throughout the day.

The preposition 'under' is incorrectly used here. The correct conjunction is 'and' to connect two actions: 'prioritize' and 'stay organized'.

× This way I can manage my time more efficient.

✓ This way I can manage my time more efficiently.

'Efficient' is an adjective but here it modifies the verb 'manage', so the adverb form 'efficiently' is required.

× In my view, some people don't like making list because they preferred to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises in there laying life for his stance, when doing activities like shopping, they might find it more exciting to decide what to buy on the spot rather than following honestly plan.

✓ In my view, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises in their daily life. For instance, when doing activities like shopping, they might find it more exciting to decide what to buy on the spot rather than following a planned list.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match 'don't like'. 'There laying life' is incorrect; it should be 'their daily life'. 'For his stance' is incorrect and replaced with 'For instance'. 'Honestly plan' is incorrect; 'planned list' or 'a plan' is appropriate.

× In my view, some people don't like making list because they preferred to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises in there laying life for his stance, when doing activities like shopping, they might find it more exciting to decide what to buy on the spot rather than following honestly plan.

✓ In my view, some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy surprises in their daily life. For instance, when doing activities like shopping, they might find it more exciting to decide what to buy on the spot rather than following a planned list.

The pronouns 'there' and 'his' are incorrectly used. The correct possessive pronouns are 'their' to refer to people generally.

× I prefer to make my list on paper because I find it easier to keep track of my tax when I come physically harm the list.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because I find it easier to keep track of my tasks when I physically have the list in hand.

'Keep track of my tax' is likely a typo for 'tasks'. 'Come physically harm the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'physically have the list in hand' or 'hold the list physically'.

× For example, when I shopping, having a paper list allows me to quickly think of items without needing to unlock my phone.

✓ For example, when I am shopping, having a paper list allows me to quickly think of items without needing to unlock my phone.

The verb 'shopping' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am shopping'.

× Also, using paper helps me avoid distraction for notification.

✓ Also, using paper helps me avoid distractions from notifications.

'Distraction for notification' is incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'distractions from notifications' to indicate what is being avoided.