列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên chính xác và dễ hiểu hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone before going to the grocery store. This helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. I also use a shopping app, which makes it very convenient to manage my list while shopping.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì và đại từ nhân xưng.

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning before starting work. It helps me organize my tasks for the day and ensures I don't forget important things that need to be done.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách đơn giản, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: I think making lists is not suitable for everyone. Some people prefer to work spontaneously and feel more productive when they go with the flow, while others need lists to organize their tasks.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa.

示例: I prefer writing my work lists on paper because it helps me think more carefully before making the list. However, for shopping, I find using a list on my phone more convenient to keep track of items.

× I usually start a list in my phone to keep track of a thing that I need to buy before going to grocery store.

✓ I usually start a list on my phone to keep track of the things that I need to buy before going to the grocery store.

The phrase 'a thing' should be plural 'the things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices is 'on'. 'Grocery store' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I usually start a list in my phone to keep track of a thing that I need to buy before going to grocery store.

✓ I usually start a list on my phone to keep track of the things that I need to buy before going to the grocery store.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone for lists; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'going to grocery store' requires the definite article 'the' before 'grocery store'.

× Also that I use an application on the phone, so it's very convenient way to take around.

✓ Also, I use an application on the phone, so it's a very convenient way to carry it around.

The phrase 'Also that I use' is incorrect; it should be 'Also, I use'. 'Take around' is not idiomatic; 'carry it around' is the correct expression. The article 'a' is missing before 'very convenient way'.

× Also that I use an application on the phone, so it's very convenient way to take around.

✓ Also, I use an application on the phone, so it's a very convenient way to carry it around.

The phrase 'very convenient way' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× I usually make A to do list every day in the morning when I start working the list.

✓ I usually make a to-do list every day in the morning when I start working.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'To do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The phrase 'start working the list' is incorrect; it should be 'start working'.

× Help me to go through your day and to note there what needs to be done within a day and also to buy auriti the things that need to be done.

✓ It helps me to go through my day and to note what needs to be done within the day, and also to buy the things that need to be done.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has unclear phrases like 'buy auriti'. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'It' and clarifies the meaning. 'Your day' is changed to 'my day' to match the speaker's perspective.

× I believe that. Making less is not for everyone.

✓ I believe that making lists is not for everyone.

'Making less' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' (plural) to refer to the activity of list-making.

× Sometimes people tend to be more productive when they work with the filling.

✓ Sometimes people tend to be more productive when they work with the feeling.

The word 'filling' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'feeling'.

× Go with the flow I guess, but for some people is will have them to manage an by our title work.

✓ Go with the flow, I guess, but for some people, it will help them to manage and organize their work.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar and word choice.

× Actually, for working I would refer Writing down the lists on paper.

✓ Actually, for work, I would prefer writing down the lists on paper.

'Refer' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'prefer'. 'For working' should be 'for work'. The gerund 'writing' should be lowercase.

× Because using Bannon note is help me to think before making the list.

✓ Because using a handwritten note helps me to think before making the list.

'Bannon note' is unclear; assuming it means 'handwritten note'. 'Is help me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'.

× Anne to me, the list on the phone can help you to keep track if you wanna go, but generally I would refer ******** Band.

✓ And to me, the list on the phone can help you to keep track if you want to go, but generally I would prefer paper.

'Anne' should be 'And'. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate. 'Refer ******** Band' is unclear; assuming 'prefer paper' is intended.