列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain why making a list saves time and how it helps you shop efficiently.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting items. For instance, when I shop at the supermarket, I check my list to ensure I buy everything I need quickly and efficiently.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. Use linking words to explain your reasoning. For example, explain how working without a list helps you concentrate and finish tasks faster.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to focus on one task at a time. This helps me concentrate better and complete my work more quickly.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain that some people prefer to rely on memory because they find it easier or faster than making lists.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and find it easier to remember what to buy. Therefore, they prefer to shop without a list and make decisions quickly.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and unclear phrases. Try to be concise and clear. Use linking words to explain your preference and reasons. For example, mention the convenience and portability of using a phone for lists.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry everywhere. Also, using apps helps me organize my shopping list efficiently.

× Well, whenever I do shopping I always make a list of things which I should buy from a market or from a supermarket 'cause it saved my time and I usually buy it in a 1/2.

✓ Well, whenever I do shopping I always make a list of things which I should buy from a market or from a supermarket because it saves my time and I usually buy them in half.

The verb 'saved' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be 'saves' to agree with the present tense context. Also, 'buy it in a 1/2' is unclear and corrected to 'buy them in half' to refer to items in plural form.

× Well, whenever I do shopping I always make a list of things which I should buy from a market or from a supermarket 'cause it saved my time and I usually buy it in a 1/2.

✓ Well, whenever I do shopping I always make a list of things which I should buy from a market or from a supermarket because it saves my time and I usually buy them in half.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'things' which is plural; it should be 'them' to match the plural noun.

× No, I do not make a list whenever I do a specific work 'cause whenever I do a any type of work I usually do it in a fluency which which make me a concentrate concentration to do that work in a less time.

✓ No, I do not make a list whenever I do specific work because whenever I do any type of work I usually do it fluently which helps me concentrate to do that work in less time.

The preposition 'in a fluency' is incorrect; 'fluently' (an adverb) should be used instead. Also, 'in a less time' is incorrect; 'in less time' is the correct phrase.

× No, I do not make a list whenever I do a specific work 'cause whenever I do a any type of work I usually do it in a fluency which which make me a concentrate concentration to do that work in a less time.

✓ No, I do not make a list whenever I do specific work because whenever I do any type of work I usually do it fluently which helps me concentrate to do that work in less time.

The phrase 'make me a concentrate concentration' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me concentrate' to correctly express the idea.

× Well, many of the people do not like to make a list to cause many muscles have sharp mind and the Orvis member of things in our few times and they always make their choice more easier while doing a shopping enough a few time as they do not like to make a list.

✓ Well, many people do not like to make a list because many people have sharp minds and can remember many things in a short time, so they always make their choices more easily while shopping a few times as they do not like to make a list.

The phrase 'many muscles have sharp mind' is incorrect; it should be 'many people have sharp minds'. Also, 'Orvis member of things in our few times' is unclear and corrected to 'can remember many things in a short time'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'more easily' is the correct adverb form.

× Well, many of the people do not like to make a list to cause many muscles have sharp mind and the Orvis member of things in our few times and they always make their choice more easier while doing a shopping enough a few time as they do not like to make a list.

✓ Well, many people do not like to make a list because many people have sharp minds and can remember many things in a short time, so they always make their choices more easily while shopping a few times as they do not like to make a list.

The preposition 'to cause' is incorrect; it should be 'because' to express reason. Also, 'while doing a shopping enough a few time' is incorrect; corrected to 'while shopping a few times'.

× In this technological era of technology is becoming more wider so that people are using their cell phones to make a list.

✓ In this technological era, technology is becoming wider so people are using their cell phones to make lists.

The phrase 'In this technological era of technology' is redundant; 'In this technological era' suffices. Also, 'more wider' is incorrect; 'wider' alone is correct.

× In this technological era of technology is becoming more wider so that people are using their cell phones to make a list.

✓ In this technological era, technology is becoming wider so people are using their cell phones to make lists.

The phrase 'more wider' is incorrect because 'wider' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary.

× As I also use my cell phone 'cause it is more convenient and comfortable for me to carry my cell phone with me and I usually make a list or my cell phone by using a last time and 80, so comfortable for me to make a list on a cell phone.

✓ I also use my cell phone because it is more convenient and comfortable for me to carry it with me, and I usually make a list on my cell phone using an app, so it is comfortable for me to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'make a list or my cell phone by using a last time and 80' is unclear and corrected to 'make a list on my cell phone using an app'. Also, repeated 'my cell phone' is simplified and pronouns corrected for clarity.