列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "normally I would just" and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and correct minor grammatical errors.

示例: Yes, I usually make a detailed shopping list, especially when buying food for storage, to ensure I don't forget any items at the grocery store.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, which affects coherence. Avoid filler phrases like "you know" and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your points.

示例: Yes, I usually create detailed lists for my academic work because during the semester I have many assignments and exams. This helps me organise my tasks effectively and meet deadlines.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid repetition like "I I" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your ideas more logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

示例: I think it depends on personality; some people prefer a more relaxed lifestyle and dislike planning ahead, so they avoid making lists about their upcoming tasks.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct comparative forms (e.g., "more convenient") and avoid redundancy. Linking words are used well; continue to develop this skill.

示例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can check my list anytime without carrying a piece of paper around.

× I usually go shopping with a particular purpose like buying some foods for storage.

✓ I usually go shopping with a particular purpose like buying some food for storage.

The word 'food' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised as 'foods'. Use 'food' to refer to items to be bought in general.

× So I normally I would just write a very comprehensive list to ensure that I didn't miss any items that need to buy from the grocery shops.

✓ So normally I would just write a very comprehensive list to ensure that I didn't miss any items that need to be bought from the grocery shops.

The phrase 'need to buy' is incorrect here because 'items' require the passive form 'need to be bought' to indicate that the items are the objects of the action.

× I have tons of work to do like assignments, test exams.

✓ I have tons of work to do like assignments, tests, and exams.

The phrase 'test exams' is redundant and awkward. 'Tests' and 'exams' are separate plural countable nouns and should be listed properly.

× And usually I think I am quite follow the.

✓ And usually I think I quite follow it.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Follow the' lacks an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and corrects the structure.

× So they don't want to list to kind of considering what they want to do in the coming few days.

✓ So they don't want to make a list or kind of consider what they want to do in the coming few days.

The phrase 'want to list to kind of considering' is incorrect. The verb 'list' should be 'make a list', and 'considering' should be the base form 'consider' after 'kind of'.

× I definitely prefer writing a list on my phone because that is much more convenience.

✓ I definitely prefer writing a list on my phone because that is much more convenient.

The word 'convenience' is a noun, but here an adjective 'convenient' is needed to describe 'that'.

× ...so that is pretty inconvenience.

✓ ...so that is pretty inconvenient.

Similarly, 'inconvenience' is a noun, but the adjective 'inconvenient' is required to describe 'that'.