列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连词连接细节，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me feel more organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建议: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法问题，表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达，并用连词连接观点和原因。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially using a digital app. It helps me remember my tasks during busy days, so it works well for me.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达观点，提供具体原因，并用连词连接句子。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it feels stressful. For example, having many tasks on a list can make them feel overwhelmed, so they prefer to work spontaneously.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但有小语法错误和表达不自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: It depends. When I'm working, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it anytime and anywhere. However, at home, I like to write lists on paper so I can stick them on the wall and see them easily.

× Are you relying make A to do list while I'm shopping?

✓ Do you rely on making a to-do list while I'm shopping?

这里动词搭配错误，动词'rely'后应接介词'on'和动名词形式'making'，而不是直接接动词原形'make'。建议使用'rely on making'结构。

× Especially used is the list I could feel more convenient and prepare for prepare full, so he so using it could help me to avoid missing something.

✓ Especially using the list makes me feel more convenient and fully prepared, so using it helps me avoid missing something.

句子结构混乱，形容词和副词使用不当。'feel more convenient'应改为'feel more comfortable'或'feel it is more convenient'，'prepare for prepare full'表达不清，应改为'fully prepared'。此外，句子中多余的词语应删除以使句子通顺。

× Yes, I make a lesser too in my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list too in my work.

'lesser'是比较级，错误地用作名词，正确的名词应为'list'。

× Especially using a digital wine could house me to remember what I need to do during the day.

✓ Especially using a digital one helps me remember what I need to do during the day.

'digital wine'显然是错误的词汇，应为'digital one'或'digital device'。'could house me to remember'表达错误，应为'helps me remember'。

× So it does the work 'cause I could not avoid some busy things.

✓ So it works because I cannot avoid some busy things.

'does the work'表达不自然，应为'works'。'cause'应写为'because'。'could not avoid'时态和语气不合，应为'cannot avoid'。

× I thought making less than May made them feels dreadful.

✓ I thought making lists may make them feel dreadful.

'less than'错误，应为'lists'。'May'应小写'may'。'made'时态不对，应为'make'。'feels'主语为复数，应为'feel'。

× For example so many tax that would let them feel Israel is really hard to finish it.

✓ For example, so many tasks would make them feel it is really hard to finish.

'tax'应为复数'tasks'。'Israel'显然是拼写错误，应为'it'. 'let them feel Israel is'结构错误，应为'make them feel it is'。

× So I thought they prefer to do some jobs spontaneously as they can.

✓ So I thought they prefer to do some jobs spontaneously as they can.

该句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× Well, it depends. If I'm working, I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause I could use it anywhere and anytime.

✓ Well, it depends. If I'm working, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can use it anywhere and anytime.

'cause'为口语缩写，正式书面语应为'because'。'could'表示过去或虚拟语气，表达能力应使用'can'。

× But if I'm am at home, I prefer to make it a paper one 'cause I could say it and put it on the wall.

✓ But if I am at home, I prefer to make it a paper one because I can see it and put it on the wall.

'I'm am'重复，应为'I am'。'could say it'应为'can see it'，因为语境是指看到清单。'cause'应改为'because'。