列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by adding missing subjects and articles. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then provide a reason using linking words.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I avoid forgetting important items and save time.

建议: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'workaholic person'. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my schedule and prioritize tasks. This way, I can manage my time effectively and complete my work on time.

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'do all work with outlet'. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything easily. Therefore, they prefer to shop or work without writing things down.

建议: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and keep your answer concise.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Since it's digital, it's more convenient than using paper lists.

× Yes, usually prefer to make a list because I think it's a very easy way to do shopping as I usually forgot a lot of things so it can be a best way to remember things.

✓ Yes, I usually prefer to make a list because I think it's a very easy way to do shopping as I usually forget a lot of things so it can be the best way to remember things.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'usually prefer', causing a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. 'a best way' should be 'the best way' because 'best' is a superlative adjective requiring the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, of course, usually I prefer to make a list for my work as it helped me to make a proper schedule and what and when I have to spend time on my things and a lot of stuff it can help me to be a. Workaholic person and it also works some.

✓ Yes, of course, I usually prefer to make a list for my work as it helps me to make a proper schedule and know what and when I have to spend time on my tasks and a lot of stuff. It can help me to be a workaholic person and it also works sometimes.

The verb 'helped' should be in present tense 'helps' to match the habitual action. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear; 'what and when I have to spend time on my things' is corrected to 'know what and when I have to spend time on my tasks' for clarity. 'works some' is corrected to 'works sometimes' for proper adverb usage.

× I think some people don't like to making a list because they think that they can remember easily, they don't forgot small and necessity things. So maybe they are the preferred to do shopping and to do all work with outlet.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because they think that they can remember easily and don't forget small and necessary things. So maybe they prefer to do shopping and all work without an outlet.

The phrase 'don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making' (gerund form after 'like'). 'don't forgot' should be 'don't forget' (present tense). 'necessity things' should be 'necessary things' (correct adjective). 'they are the preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'they prefer'. 'with outlet' is unclear and likely incorrect preposition; changed to 'without an outlet' for clarity, though context is ambiguous.

× I usually prefer to make a list on phone as I always carry my phone with me as it's very necessity to have phone as it's a digital thing. So I always better to make list on phone rather than making on list rather than making on paper.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone as I always carry it with me since it's very necessary to have a phone because it's a digital device. So I always prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

The phrase 'make a list on phone' should be 'make a list on my phone' to specify possession. 'very necessity' is incorrect; it should be 'very necessary' (adjective). 'I always better to make list' is incorrect; it should be 'I always prefer to make a list'. The repeated phrase 'rather than making on list rather than making on paper' is redundant and corrected to 'rather than on paper' for clarity and correctness.