列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: My brother, your answer no too clear and e get plenty grammar wahala. Try dey answer the question directly and make your sentences dey clear and simple. No need to dey use too many words wey no relate well. Also, try to dey use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas well.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I don't forget important items and I can shop faster.

建议: My guy, your answer no too clear and e get confusion. Try dey answer the question directly and use simple sentences. Explain why you no dey make list for work and how e affect you. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your answer smooth.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because it makes me feel restricted. I prefer to work freely without following a strict plan.

建议: My brother, your answer get some good points but e still dey confuse. Try dey speak clearly and complete your sentences. Explain the reasons well and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel too serious and stressed. As a result, they may not finish all the tasks on the list.

建议: My guy, your answer dey okay but e get some grammar and clarity issues. Try dey speak smoothly and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating words and keep your answer short and clear.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check or add items anytime, unlike paper lists which I might forget at home.

× Yes, yes I do make at least when I go to purchase any EMS goes so goes because I would like to work on a project.

✓ Yes, I do make a list at least when I go to purchase any items because I would like to work on a project.

The original sentence has unclear and disorganized structure, making it difficult to understand. Simplifying and organizing the sentence improves clarity and coherence.

× So that I don't have to. Cool beyond that.

✓ So that I don't have to go beyond that.

The phrase 'Cool beyond that' is unclear and does not fit the context. Correcting it to 'go beyond that' makes the sentence meaningful.

× I tried to take please try to make this of all this is alright surprise an interesting experience to do this.

✓ I try to make this an interesting experience to do.

The original sentence is confusing and contains redundant words. Simplifying it to a clear statement improves understanding.

× I don't make list.

✓ I don't make a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it.

× This is because it's it's so it's make put me on a tight corner.

✓ This is because it makes me feel cornered.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Rephrasing it to a simpler form conveys the intended meaning.

× I'll have to be walking or within at least an it doesn't make me feel is that it's not an exciting experience.

✓ I have to keep walking, and it doesn't make me feel that it's an exciting experience.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Correcting the structure clarifies the meaning.

× I tried to ask so for this I don't think for this I tried to. Work with at least.

✓ I try to avoid it at least.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Simplifying it to a clear statement improves comprehension.

× I don't like making these.

✓ I don't like making lists.

The word 'these' is vague here; using the plural noun 'lists' clarifies the meaning.

× I don't think other people enjoy making list because.

✓ I don't think other people enjoy making lists because.

The sentence ends abruptly and 'list' should be plural 'lists' to be grammatically correct.

× Because it's always make them feel.

✓ Because it always makes them feel.

The sentence is incomplete and the verb form is incorrect; correcting verb agreement and completing the sentence is necessary.

× Feels it makes them so serious and they end up not not accomplishing the whole task they had on the list.

✓ It makes them so serious that they end up not accomplishing the whole task they had on the list.

The original sentence has redundant words and awkward phrasing; rephrasing improves clarity.

× Are usually I usually go for the phone because.

✓ I usually go for the phone because.

The phrase 'Are usually' is unnecessary and incorrect; removing it corrects the sentence.

× Is is our something I walk around with all the time, and I always have to go back to it whenever I forget something or I remember to add add up something unlike that of this.

✓ It is something I carry with me all the time, and I always go back to it whenever I forget something or remember to add something, unlike paper lists.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear; rephrasing and correcting word choice improves understanding.

× You might you might forget it at home, and that is all about that's does.

✓ You might forget it at home, and that's the problem with paper lists.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear; simplifying and clarifying the meaning improves communication.