列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "order should be lucky". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, when I have many items to buy, the list keeps me organized and prevents me from forgetting anything.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they are very useful. When I have many tasks, the list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important duties.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu chủ đề và giải thích rõ lý do. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Also, they might prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng câu chủ đề và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho sự lựa chọn của bạn.

示例: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my tasks anytime without needing extra paper.

× Yes, of course making a list helped me a lot when there's a lot of things to buy and make sure that when I go to market order should be lucky, I will not forget anything to buy.

✓ Yes, of course, making a list helps me a lot when there are a lot of things to buy and makes sure that when I go to the market, I will not forget anything to buy.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and verb forms. 'Making a list helped me' should be 'making a list helps me' to match the present tense context. 'There's a lot of things' should be 'there are a lot of things' due to plural 'things'. Also, 'make sure' should be 'makes sure' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. The phrase 'order should be lucky' is unclear and likely a mistranslation; it is omitted for clarity. The sentence is corrected to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, of course making a list helped me a lot when there's a lot of things to buy and make sure that when I go to market order should be lucky, I will not forget anything to buy.

✓ Yes, of course, making a list helps me a lot when there are a lot of things to buy and makes sure that when I go to the market, I will not forget anything to buy.

The phrase 'there's a lot of things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural, so it should be 'there are a lot of things'. Also, 'market' should be preceded by 'the' as it refers to a specific place.

× Yes, of course, or according to Lee, making a list is supply very useful. Eventually when you have alot of things to do, uh, making a list have me to stay updated and I will I will don't put I wouldn't forget anything important to do.

✓ Yes, of course, according to me, making a list is very useful. Eventually, when you have a lot of things to do, making a list helps me stay updated and I will not forget anything important to do.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'Making a list is supply very useful' should be 'making a list is very useful'. 'Making a list have me to stay updated' should be 'making a list helps me stay updated'. The phrase 'I will I will don't put I wouldn't forget' is confusing and corrected to 'I will not forget'. Also, 'alot' should be 'a lot'.

× Yes, of course, or according to Lee, making a list is supply very useful. Eventually when you have alot of things to do, uh, making a list have me to stay updated and I will I will don't put I wouldn't forget anything important to do.

✓ Yes, of course, according to me, making a list is very useful. Eventually, when you have a lot of things to do, making a list helps me stay updated and I will not forget anything important to do.

The phrase 'alot of things' should be 'a lot of things' as 'a lot' is two words. Also, 'making a list have me' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'making a list helps me'.

× According to my experience of the people about me, including my coworkers, often choose not to do not to do the list before the. The working because they they have a lot of things to do and when they read others.

✓ According to my experience with the people around me, including my coworkers, they often choose not to make a list before working because they have a lot of things to do and when they read others' lists.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. 'Choose not to do not to do the list before the. The working' is corrected to 'choose not to make a list before working'. 'Read others' is incomplete and corrected to 'read others' lists' for clarity.

× According to my experience of the people about me, including my coworkers, often choose not to do not to do the list before the. The working because they they have a lot of things to do and when they read others.

✓ According to my experience with the people around me, including my coworkers, they often choose not to make a list before working because they have a lot of things to do and when they read others' lists.

The phrase 'experience of the people about me' is incorrect; it should be 'experience with the people around me'. Also, 'before the. The working' is incorrect preposition and article usage; corrected to 'before working'.

× According to my experience of the people about me, including my coworkers, often choose not to do not to do the list before the. The working because they they have a lot of things to do and when they read others.

✓ According to my experience with the people around me, including my coworkers, they often choose not to make a list before working because they have a lot of things to do and when they read others' lists.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject pronoun for 'often choose'; adding 'they' clarifies the subject. Also, 'others' should be possessive 'others'' to indicate ownership of lists.

× Uhm it depends on but often I use the mobile phone my phone to make a list because I always bring my phone when I need to check what I need to do. I often I just need to bring the phone by myself.

✓ Uhm, it depends, but often I use my mobile phone to make a list because I always bring my phone when I need to check what I need to do. I often just need to bring the phone with me.

The phrase 'depends on but' is incomplete; 'depends' should be followed by an object or omitted. 'Bring the phone by myself' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with me' to indicate accompaniment.