列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免语法错误，同时简化句子，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I think it's unnecessary. However, this habit is not good because I often forget important items and have to go shopping again later.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用简单明了的句子，注意连接词的使用，使回答更连贯。同时，避免重复和不完整的句子。

示例: I don't have a job recently, but sometimes I make a list for my study. However, it is not very useful because I write down too many tasks and can't finish them, which makes me feel stressed.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词，使内容更连贯和具体。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time. They prefer to spend that time on more important things. Also, they may not be sure if making a list will help them.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议使用完整句子，注意时态和单复数，明确表达偏好并给出具体理由。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my smartphone because there are many convenient apps. They allow me to write lists anytime and remind me of important tasks.

× Well, to be honest I don't make a shopping list becaused I think that is unnecessary for me.

✓ Well, to be honest I don't make a shopping list because I think that it is unnecessary for me.

句中单词拼写错误，'becaused'应为'because'，这是拼写错误，不属于语法问题，但需纠正。

× However, I think there's habit is not a very good 'cause I always forget a lot of important item that means I had to find some other time 2 by 8 again.

✓ However, I think this habit is not very good because I always forget a lot of important items, which means I have to find some other time to buy again.

'there's habit'应为'this habit'，'item'应为复数'items'，因为前面有'a lot of'，表示复数。'2 by 8'应为'to buy'，拼写错误。

× However, I think there's habit is not a very good 'cause I always forget a lot of important item that means I had to find some other time 2 by 8 again.

✓ However, I think this habit is not very good because I always forget a lot of important items, which means I have to find some other time to buy again.

'cause'是口语缩写，正式写作中应使用'because'。句中连接词使用不当，需用'which means'连接两个句子。

× Well, actually I don't have any work recently, but sometimes I will make us a nest for my study, but I think that is not useful for me becaused I will write everything down in my list.

✓ Well, actually I haven't had any work recently, but sometimes I make a list for my study, though I think it is not useful for me because I write everything down in my list.

'don't have any work recently'时态不准确，应使用现在完成时'haven't had'表示最近一段时间。'will make us a nest'拼写错误，应为'make a list'。

× Well, actually I don't have any work recently, but sometimes I will make us a nest for my study, but I think that is not useful for me becaused I will write everything down in my list.

✓ Well, actually I haven't had any work recently, but sometimes I make a list for my study, though I think it is not useful for me because I write everything down in my list.

'make us a nest'中的'us'使用错误，应为'a list'，这里是名词错误。

× That result I couldn't finish them.

✓ As a result, I couldn't finish them.

'That result'用法错误，应为'As a result'表示结果。

× After the I will feel more stress and.

✓ After that, I feel more stressed.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，'After the'应为'After that'，'feel more stress and'不完整，改为'feel more stressed'。

× Well, I think there are several reasons. Firstly making a less than need to spend some time some people will think.

✓ Well, I think there are several reasons. Firstly, making a list needs to spend some time, some people think so.

'making a less'应为'making a list'，'less'拼写错误。'need'应为'needs'，因为主语是单数动名词短语。

× They can use the time to do more important things once more.

✓ They think they can use the time to do more important things instead.

句子结构不清晰，'once more'用法不当，改为'instead'更符合语境。

× They don't know whether the plane is suit suit for them.

✓ They don't know whether the plan is suitable for them.

'plane'应为'plan'，拼写错误。'suit suit'重复，应为'suitable'，形容词形式。

× Will compare ring with use paper.

✓ When comparing writing with using paper,

句子不完整且拼写错误，'Will compare ring'应为'When comparing writing'。

× I choose to use a smartphone becaused right now there have a lot of convenient apps.

✓ I choose to use a smartphone because right now there are a lot of convenient apps.

'becaused'拼写错误，应为'because'。'there have'应为'there are'，主谓不一致。

× I can write my list in the app site in special time.

✓ I can write my list in the app at any time.

'in the app site in special time'表达不正确，应为'in the app at any time'。

× They can remind me I have to do something.

✓ They can remind me that I have to do something.

缺少连接词'that'，使句子更完整。