列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and make your sentences more natural. For example, say "It helps me stop impulsive buying and keep within my budget." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I like to make a list when I shop because it helps me stop impulsive buying and keep within my budget.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words. For example, say "I always try to make a list for my work because it helps me maintain the sequence and keep track of my tasks throughout the day." Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

示例: I always try to make a list for my work because it helps me maintain the sequence and keep track of my tasks throughout the day. This way, I can plan my schedule effectively and complete my work on time.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and feel that lists restrict their freedom."

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and feel that lists restrict their freedom. They like to work at their own pace without sticking to a fixed plan.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. For example, say "I prefer to make lists on my phone, usually using the Notes app, so I can quickly check and plan my tasks wherever I am."

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone, usually using the Notes app, so I can quickly check and plan my tasks wherever I am.

× It helps me to stop myself from impulsive buying and keep me in budget.

✓ It helps me to stop myself from impulsive buying and keep me within budget.

The phrase 'keep me in budget' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'within' when referring to staying inside a budget limit. Also, 'impulsive buying' is correct as a noun phrase here.

× I always tried to make a list for my work and it always helps me to maintain the sequence or.

✓ I always try to make a list for my work and it always helps me to maintain the sequence.

The sentence mixes past tense 'tried' with present tense 'helps'. Since the habit is ongoing, present tense 'try' should be used. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'or' which is incomplete and should be removed.

× Keep track on me in the work and.

✓ It helps me keep track of my work.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. The phrase 'keep track on me in the work' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep track of my work'. The sentence should be complete and clear.

× Throughout the day I can make a schedule for my work.

✓ Throughout the day, I can make a schedule for my work.

A comma is needed after 'Throughout the day' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause for clarity.

× And I end up today.

✓ And I end up my work today.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'my work' clarifies what is ended today.

× I like to check on of the world.

✓ I like to check off the work.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Check off the work' makes sense in context of completing tasks.

× Maybe some people don't like to make a list they thought it is most of the time.

✓ Maybe some people don't like to make a list because they think it takes too much time.

The sentence has pronoun and tense errors. 'They thought' should be 'they think' to match present tense. Also, 'it is most of the time' is unclear; 'takes too much time' is a clearer expression.

× Are there like to work spontaneously there?

✓ They like to work spontaneously there.

'Are there' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'They' to refer to people.

× Maybe they think it stopped them for.

✓ Maybe they think it stops them.

The sentence is incomplete and uses past tense 'stopped' incorrectly. Present tense 'stops' fits better and the phrase 'for' is unnecessary.

× I think freedom Lee work, freedom Lee are.

✓ I think they like to work freely,

'Freedom Lee' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'freely'. Also, 'freely work' is the correct adverb form.

× They like to work on their page.

✓ They like to work at their own pace.

'Page' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at their own pace' meaning their own speed or style.

× Don don't want to stick on it.

✓ They don't want to stick to it.

'Don' is incorrect; 'They' is the correct pronoun. Also, the correct preposition is 'stick to' not 'stick on'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Usually I use Note app on my phone so that whenever I go, wherever I go, I can check on my phone quickly and plan for the next.

✓ Usually I use the Notes app on my phone so that whenever I go, wherever I go, I can check my phone quickly and plan for the next task.

'Note app' should be 'the Notes app' as it is a specific app. Also, 'check on my phone' should be 'check my phone'. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'task' clarifies the meaning.

× What should I do?

✓ What I should do.

In context, the phrase 'plan for the next what should I do?' is incorrect. It should be 'plan for the next task of what I should do.' However, since this is a fragment, it is better to rephrase as 'plan what I should do next.'