列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are fragmented and unclear. Try to make complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and focus on clear expression.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and keeps me within my budget. Moreover, it prevents me from making impulsive purchases.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct tense and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work in the early morning. This helps me schedule my day effectively and complete my tasks on time.

建议: Your answer has good points but is unclear due to fragmented sentences and incorrect word choices. Try to use complete sentences and clearer vocabulary to express your ideas.

示例: Some people may dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. Also, they prefer to work spontaneously and do not like to feel restricted by a list.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has incomplete sentences. Try to combine your ideas into clear, complete sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because it is more convenient. However, I also use a note app on my phone so I can access my list anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I usually try to make a list whenever I do shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually try to make a list whenever I go shopping.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'shopping'. The correct form is 'go shopping' to express the activity of shopping in English.

× It helps me to memorize the things. What? Which I should buy or not? Make me keep me in budget.

✓ It helps me remember the things I should buy or not and helps me keep within my budget.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's stopped me from impulsive buying.

✓ It stops me from impulsive buying.

The present perfect 'It's stopped' is incorrect here; the simple present 'It stops' is appropriate to express a habitual action.

× Yes, I made your list always for my work and it's always helps me.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always helps me.

The past tense 'made' is incorrect for a habitual action; the simple present 'make' should be used. Also, 'your list' is incorrect; it should be 'a list'.

× When in the early morning I usually made it To Do List.

✓ In the early morning, I usually make a To-Do List.

The sentence structure is awkward and the tense is incorrect. Using simple present tense and proper word order improves clarity.

× So I can. I can schedule my day according to the work.

✓ So I can schedule my day according to the work.

The sentence is fragmented; combining the parts into one complete sentence is necessary.

× Maybe some people don't like to make a list because they think it is just time raised, or they are. Very. Conscious about the work they're doing.

✓ Maybe some people don't like to make a list because they think it is just a waste of time, or they are very conscious about the work they're doing.

'Time raised' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'. Also, unnecessary periods break the sentence.

× They like to do spontaneous work. They don't like to in limitation or.

✓ They like to do spontaneous work. They don't like to be limited or restricted.

The phrase 'to in limitation or' is incorrect and incomplete. Correcting it to 'to be limited or restricted' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list on paper, it is more convenient. But however I usually make.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it is more convenient. However, I usually use a note app on my phone to make a list.

'But however' is redundant; use either 'but' or 'however'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be completed for clarity.

× Use a note app on my phone to make a list so that I can carry whenever. Whenever I go on. Whatever I need to see it. Or I need it it's more.

✓ I use a note app on my phone to make a list so that I can carry it whenever I go out and see whatever I need.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.