列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

示例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I can remember what I need. For example, I often buy fruits, vegetables, and sometimes accessories like earrings without writing them down.

建议: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và sửa lỗi để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize and prioritize tasks for the day or even longer periods like a month or a year. It works well since I can clearly see all my responsibilities.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý không được truyền đạt tốt. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và giải thích rõ lý do với ví dụ cụ thể.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time or they don't know how to plan effectively using a list.

建议: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lặp từ, đồng thời trả lời rõ ràng hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it for almost everything. It's very convenient and I can access my lists anytime I need.

× Well, I don't really make a list when go shopping because I tend to remember all of them.

✓ Well, I don't really make a list when I go shopping because I tend to remember all of them.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before the verb 'go'. Every clause needs a subject and a verb to be complete. Adding 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× So for instance, I'll buy some fruit, vegetable or even accessory like.

✓ So for instance, I'll buy some fruit, vegetables, or even accessories like.

The nouns 'vegetable' and 'accessory' should be plural to match the context of buying multiple items. Using plural forms 'vegetables' and 'accessories' is grammatically correct here.

× Jewelry, earring, something that I all remember it.

✓ Jewelry, earrings, something that I all remember.

The sentence has an unnecessary pronoun 'it' at the end and 'earring' should be plural 'earrings' to match the list. Removing 'it' and pluralizing 'earrings' corrects the sentence.

× Yes, to be honest I always make a list for my work.

✓ Yes, to be honest, I always make a list for my work.

A comma is needed after 'to be honest' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity.

× It helps me organize and prioritize the tasks that I need to complete it day or even longer period like command or a year.

✓ It helps me organize and prioritize the tasks that I need to complete in a day or even longer periods like a month or a year.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used after 'complete'. Also, 'command' is likely a typo for 'month'. Adding 'in' before 'a day' and correcting 'command' to 'month' improves clarity and correctness.

× And it works for me because I can see the all my responsibilities clearly and.

✓ And it works for me because I can see all my responsibilities clearly.

The phrase 'the all my' is incorrect; 'all my' is sufficient. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which should be removed to complete the sentence.

× In my part of you don't like making lists because they think at ways the time or maybe they don't know how to plan work with that plan effectively.

✓ In my part of view, people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time or maybe they don't know how to plan work effectively with that plan.

The phrase 'part of you' should be 'part of view'. 'They think at ways the time' is incorrect; it should be 'they think it wastes time'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Well, I'm a addicted to my phone, yes, but it in a positive way.

✓ Well, I'm addicted to my phone, yes, but in a positive way.

The article 'a' before 'addicted' is incorrect; 'addicted' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. Also, 'it in a positive way' is incorrect; it should be 'in a positive way'.

× I mean I do all task on my phone, so I tend to make a list on my phone is quite convenient Ann.

✓ I mean I do all tasks on my phone, so I tend to make a list on my phone because it is quite convenient.

The sentence is missing a conjunction and subject-verb agreement. 'All task' should be 'all tasks'. 'Ann' is likely a typo for 'and' or 'because'. Adding 'because it is' clarifies the sentence.

× It really convenient for me whenever I want to use a megalith.

✓ It is really convenient for me whenever I want to use a list.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'It'. Also, 'megalith' is likely a typo for 'list'. Adding 'is' and correcting the word improves the sentence.