列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example using linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, check your grammar and pronunciation to make your answer more natural.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list whenever I go to the supermarket. For example, last week I prepared a list before going, which helped me avoid forgetting any items. Using a list makes shopping more convenient and efficient for me.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using complete sentences and linking words. Start with a clear statement, then explain your reason with supporting details. Avoid informal contractions and try to be more precise in your explanation.

示例: Usually, I don't make a list for my work because I consider myself an organised person. I prefer to keep all the tasks in my mind, and so far, this method has worked well for me.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things themselves. Also, they might find lists unnecessary or time-consuming, especially when shopping.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by organising your ideas clearly and using linking words. Use complete sentences and avoid repetition. Explain your preference with specific details about how you use your phone for lists.

示例: Usually, I make lists on paper with a pen, but nowadays I prefer using my phone. I use different apps like Notes, which remind me of the items and allow me to arrange and rearrange the list easily according to my needs.

× Yes, usually I do make a load the latest whenever I go to the supermarket.

✓ Yes, usually I do make a list of the latest items whenever I go to the supermarket.

The phrase 'make a load the latest' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'make a list of the latest items'. The verb 'make' should be followed by the noun 'list' and the phrase 'of the latest items' to clarify what is being listed.

× For example when I go to. Does a bear market last week when I went to the supermarket last week, I make a list and by using a list it is more convenient to me to forgetting items.

✓ For example, when I went to the supermarket last week, I made a list, and by using a list, it is more convenient for me to avoid forgetting items.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'Does a bear market'. The corrected sentence clarifies the time frame using past tense 'went' and 'made', and corrects the phrase 'to forgetting items' to 'to avoid forgetting items' for grammatical correctness.

× Usually I don't make a list for my work 'cause I think I'm a very organized person and I do all the things in my mind and it would say that.

✓ Usually, I don't make a list for my work because I think I'm a very organized person and I do all the things in my mind, and I would say that.

The phrase 'it would say that' is incorrect; it should be 'I would say that' to correctly refer to the speaker. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be 'because' in formal speech.

× I'm not using a list for my work also.

✓ I don't use a list for my work either.

The phrase 'I'm not using' is present continuous, which is less appropriate here. The simple present 'I don't use' fits better for habitual actions. Also, 'also' at the end is better replaced with 'either' for negative sentences.

× Oh really? I think people don't like making list to be 'cause they have a.

✓ Oh really? I think people don't like making lists because they have a good memory.

The phrase 'making list to be' is incorrect. It should be 'making lists because'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'a good memory' completes the thought logically.

× Do you have a mind thinking good?

✓ Do they have a good memory?

The original sentence uses 'you' and 'mind thinking good' incorrectly. The intended meaning is about people in general, so 'they' is appropriate, and 'a good memory' is the correct phrase.

× They don't have a forgetting the things and also by the things into their budgets also and don't take unnecessary things.

✓ They don't forget things and also keep things within their budgets and don't buy unnecessary items.

The phrase 'have a forgetting the things' is incorrect; it should be 'don't forget things'. 'By the things into their budgets' is incorrect; it should be 'keep things within their budgets'. Also, 'don't take unnecessary things' is better expressed as 'don't buy unnecessary items'.

× So while they're shopping.

✓ So, while they're shopping, they avoid buying unnecessary items.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. The correction completes the sentence to convey a full idea.

× Usually I do it with the paper or pen and but nowadays I'm using my phone always and I do a mic list on my mobile with different apps like notes and also remind me this list and also AM to arrange and to rearrange the list according to me.

✓ Usually, I use paper and pen, but nowadays I always use my phone and make lists on my mobile with different apps like Notes, which also remind me of the list and allow me to arrange and rearrange the list according to my preferences.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'do it with the paper or pen' should be 'use paper and pen'; 'do a mic list' should be 'make lists'; 'remind me this list' should be 'remind me of the list'; 'AM to arrange' is unclear and corrected to 'allow me to arrange'; 'according to me' should be 'according to my preferences'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.