列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lặp lại hoặc không liên quan. Ví dụ, hãy nói rõ bạn làm danh sách để tiết kiệm thời gian và không quên món đồ cần mua.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên nói rõ cách danh sách giúp bạn chuẩn bị cho bài kiểm tra.

示例: Yes, when I study for a test, I make a list of tasks to follow. This helps me stay organized and ensures I am well prepared the next day.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'plant' nên là 'plan', 'fill' nên là 'feel'. Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do và quan điểm cá nhân.

示例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and don't want to follow a strict plan. However, I think this approach is less effective for organizing work efficiently.

建议: Bạn cần nói câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng giấy hơn điện thoại và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting since I might open other apps. Therefore, writing on paper helps me focus better.

× I usually do 'cause I have to list all the thing that I need an when I go to the grocery shop.

✓ I usually do 'cause I have to list all the things that I need when I go to the grocery shop.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items needed. Using singular 'thing' is incorrect when referring to multiple objects.

× I usually do 'cause I have to list all the thing that I need an when I go to the grocery shop.

✓ I usually do 'cause I have to list all the things that I need when I go to the grocery shop.

The preposition 'an' is incorrect here and should be removed. The correct phrase is 'that I need when I go to the grocery shop.'

× It will save more time for me too. Bye. All things on the list.

✓ It will save more time for me too. By having all things on the list.

The sentence 'Bye. All things on the list.' is fragmented and unclear. It should be restructured to 'By having all things on the list' to clarify the meaning.

× Well, when I'm study, especially when I'm preparing for a test, I always make a list and have me to stick on the plan so that I can summarize all the thing that I have to do to make sure that my test.

✓ Well, when I study, especially when I'm preparing for a test, I always make a list and make myself stick to the plan so that I can summarize all the things that I have to do to make sure that my test is prepared.

The phrase 'I'm study' is incorrect; it should be 'I study' (present simple). 'Have me to stick' is incorrect; it should be 'make myself stick'. 'All the thing' should be plural 'all the things'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'is prepared' to complete the meaning.

× In the next day will be prepared. Test.

✓ The next day, the test will be prepared.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. It should be rephrased to 'The next day, the test will be prepared' to correctly express future tense and proper sentence structure.

× I always make a list and have me to stick on the plan so that I can summarize all the thing that I have to do to make sure that my test.

✓ I always make a list and make myself stick to the plan so that I can summarize all the things that I have to do to make sure that my test is prepared.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect after 'stick'. The correct preposition is 'to' as in 'stick to the plan'.

× I always make a list and have me to stick on the plan so that I can summarize all the thing that I have to do to make sure that my test.

✓ I always make a list and make myself stick to the plan so that I can summarize all the things that I have to do to make sure that my test is prepared.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple tasks to do.

× In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they tend to avoid sticking to a strict plant.

✓ In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they tend to avoid sticking to a strict plan.

The word 'plant' is a typo and should be 'plan'. This is a vocabulary error rather than preposition, but correcting it is necessary for meaning.

× They preferred to do things randomly which can fill more flexible to them.

✓ They prefer to do things randomly which can feel more flexible to them.

The verb tense 'preferred' should be present tense 'prefer' to match the context. Also, 'fill' is incorrect and should be 'feel'.

× However, I think is approach.

✓ However, I think this approach is not very effective for organizing work efficiently.

The sentence is missing the subject 'this' before 'approach'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× Is not very effective for organizing work efficiently.

✓ It is not very effective for organizing work efficiently.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Well, I tend to make a list on the paper because when I use the phone I will. Touching others stuff like open the apps and serving it.

✓ Well, I tend to make a list on paper because when I use the phone I will touch other stuff like open apps and surf it.

The phrase 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'Touching others stuff' should be 'touch other stuff'. 'Serving it' is incorrect and should be 'surf it' or 'use it'.

× So I think it is. Better to stay away from the phone when we're.

✓ So I think it is better to stay away from the phone when we're working.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the verb 'working' to complete the meaning. Also, the period after 'is' is incorrect and should be removed.