列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add a specific reason. For example, avoid repeating phrases and clarify your points.

示例: I don't usually enjoy shopping, but when I do, I always make a list because I tend to forget things easily and it helps me remember what to buy.

建议: Improve clarity and grammar by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make lists for my work, and they help me a lot because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, having a list ensures I stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建议: Focus on clear and logical explanation with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember things for a long time. They think making lists is a waste of time since they trust their memory.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and adding linking words for coherence. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes and provide a concise reason for your preference.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the Notes app because it's convenient. However, if I don't have my phone, I make lists on paper instead.

× I usually I usually don't like to do shopping but whenever I made I have to do shopping I make list because I have my forgettable person and I don't remember things for long time and I like I prefer to make list.

✓ I usually don't like to do shopping but whenever I have to do shopping I make a list because I am forgetful and I don't remember things for a long time, so I prefer to make a list.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'made' with present tense context; 'made' should be 'have' to match the present habitual action. Also, 'my forgettable person' is incorrect; it should be 'I am forgetful' to describe the speaker. Additionally, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the article. The phrase 'I like I prefer' is redundant; 'I prefer' suffices. The sentence also lacks articles and proper conjunctions for clarity.

× I usually I usually don't like to do shopping but whenever I made I have to do shopping I make list because I have my forgettable person and I don't remember things for long time and I like I prefer to make list.

✓ I usually don't like to do shopping but whenever I have to do shopping I make a list because I am forgetful and I don't remember things for a long time, so I prefer to make a list.

The phrase 'for long time' is missing the article 'a' before 'long time'. In English, time expressions like 'a long time' require the indefinite article to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I always make list for work well and it's helping me a lot because I am a I-10 four get things easily and I don't remember things for a long time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for work and it helps me a lot because I am forgetful and I don't remember things for a long time.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make a list' to include the indefinite article. Also, 'it's helping me' is better expressed as 'it helps me' to indicate habitual action. The phrase 'I am a I-10 four get things easily' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'I am forgetful'.

× Yes, I always make list for work well and it's helping me a lot because I am a I-10 four get things easily and I don't remember things for a long time.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for work and it helps me a lot because I am forgetful and I don't remember things for a long time.

The phrase 'I am a I-10 four get things easily' is an incorrect use of pronouns and words; it should be 'I am forgetful' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a'.

× Well, many people don't for get it in for get things for a long time. They that's why they don't like to make list.

✓ Well, many people don't forget things for a long time. That's why they don't like to make lists.

The phrase 'make list' should be pluralized to 'make lists' to match the context of general habit. Also, 'don't for get it in for get things' is a mispronunciation and should be 'don't forget things'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× They remembered that they remember things for a long time and they think it's a waste of time to make list instead of they can remember their things.

✓ They remember things for a long time and think it's a waste of time to make lists because they can remember their things.

The phrase 'They remembered that they remember' is inconsistent in tense; 'remember' is sufficient. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural. The phrase 'instead of they can remember' is incorrect; it should be 'because they can remember'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone. There is a application on iPhone that called Notes.

✓ Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone. There is an application on the iPhone called Notes.

The article 'a' before 'application' should be 'an' because 'application' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'on iPhone' should be 'on the iPhone' to specify the device. The phrase 'that called Notes' should be 'called Notes' or 'that is called Notes' for grammatical correctness.

× Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone. There is a application on iPhone that called Notes.

✓ Well, I always prefer to make a list on my phone. There is an application on the iPhone called Notes.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'iPhone' to specify the device. Also, 'a' should be 'an' before 'application' because it starts with a vowel sound.