列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了做购物清单的习惯，但语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的清晰度。建议练习使用简单且正确的句子结构，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and makes me feel more organized.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me organize my tasks by the hour and keeps me focused throughout the day.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，句子结构混乱，词汇使用不当，导致表达难以理解。建议多练习表达原因时的句型和词汇，确保逻辑清晰。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome. For example, my friend prefers to remember things without writing them down when we travel.

建议: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，句子不连贯，表达混乱。建议学习如何清楚表达偏好，并使用相关词汇描述理由。

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can easily write down my ideas and carry the list with me in my bag.

× Yes, I do make a list of our shop, maybe make me feel more safety and I can see all the things that which I want to buy and I will never forgot, forget or something that I must to buy. It is important to me.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for our shopping, maybe it makes me feel safer and I can see all the things that I want to buy and I will never forget something that I must buy. It is important to me.

这里'shop'应改为'shopping'表示购物活动；'make me feel more safety'中'safety'应为形容词'safer'；'forgot, forget'重复且时态错误，应统一为'forget'；'something that I must to buy'中'must to buy'错误，'must'后直接接动词原形。

× Yes, I do make a list of our shop, maybe make me feel more safety and I can see all the things that which I want to buy and I will never forgot, forget or something that I must to buy. It is important to me.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for our shopping, maybe it makes me feel safer and I can see all the things that I want to buy and I will never forget something that I must buy. It is important to me.

'forgot'是过去式，句中应使用现在时'forget'，因为表达的是习惯动作。

× Yes, I do make a list of our shop, maybe make me feel more safety and I can see all the things that which I want to buy and I will never forgot, forget or something that I must to buy. It is important to me.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for our shopping, maybe it makes me feel safer and I can see all the things that I want to buy and I will never forget something that I must buy. It is important to me.

'that which I want to buy'中'which'多余，直接用'that'即可。

× Yes, I do make a list of our shop, maybe make me feel more safety and I can see all the things that which I want to buy and I will never forgot, forget or something that I must to buy. It is important to me.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for our shopping, maybe it makes me feel safer and I can see all the things that I want to buy and I will never forget something that I must buy. It is important to me.

'must to buy'中'must'后不加'to'，应直接接动词原形。

× Oh I don't know, maybe some peoples think it is a trouble seize up. Maybe I will say my friend, she doesn't like making a list. She like to wear it when we have our tribal traveling. She like us to whenever.

✓ Oh I don't know, maybe some people think it is a trouble to deal with. Maybe I will say my friend, she doesn't like making a list. She likes to wear it when we have our tribal traveling. She likes us to whenever.

'peoples'应为'people'，因为'people'是复数形式；'She like'应为'She likes'，主谓一致。

× Oh I don't know, maybe some peoples think it is a trouble seize up. Maybe I will say my friend, she doesn't like making a list. She like to wear it when we have our tribal traveling. She like us to whenever.

✓ Oh I don't know, maybe some people think it is a trouble to deal with. Maybe I will say my friend, she doesn't like making a list. She likes to wear it when we have our tribal traveling. She likes us to whenever.

'seize up'用法错误，正确表达应为'trouble to deal with'。

× Yes, I do. It is necessary for me. I you really start work with a list of each hour which I need to do after day and it'll always make me up.

✓ Yes, I do. It is necessary for me. I really start work with a list for each hour which I need to do after the day and it'll always keep me motivated.

'I you really start'中'you'多余，应去掉；'make me up'表达不清，改为'keep me motivated'更合适。

× Yes, I do. It is necessary for me. I you really start work with a list of each hour which I need to do after day and it'll always make me up.

✓ Yes, I do. It is necessary for me. I really start work with a list for each hour which I need to do after the day and it'll always keep me motivated.

'list of each hour'应为'list for each hour'，'after day'应为'after the day'。

× I prefer to make list by paper on. I like to have an earth burger on my bag and I have some ideas. All have some list needed to write. Need to record I potato and riser list in my book.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper. I like to have a notebook in my bag and I have some ideas. I have some lists that need to be written. I need to record my potato and rice list in my book.

'make list'应为'make lists'；'earth burger'应为'notebook'；'All have some list needed to write'语法混乱，改为'I have some lists that need to be written'；'I potato and riser list'应为'my potato and rice list'。