列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and correct grammar mistakes. For example, instead of 'helps me to remind the things', say 'helps me remember what to buy'.

示例: Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents impulse purchases. Additionally, it keeps me within my budget. I usually use a shopping app to track my list, which is very convenient. Although I have a good memory, sometimes stress makes me forget items, so the list is helpful.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and be specific about how making lists helped you.

示例: I don't usually make lists for my work now, but when I was a child, I used to make lists to manage my household chores. This helped me organize my time better, allowing me to focus more on my studies. As a result, I improved not only academically but also developed other skills.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit confusing and contains grammar mistakes. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to explain reasons logically. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'good day to remember all the things in their hand'.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe it doesn't help much. Additionally, some don't know how to create effective lists, so they prefer to rely on their memory to keep track of tasks instead.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. Also, be more concise and clear.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Paper lists can get damaged or lost, so I avoid using them. Also, when I suddenly remember something to buy, I can quickly add it to my phone list, which is very convenient.

× Some people don't like to making list because they think it is a time consuming thing which never helps them a lot.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it is a time-consuming thing which never helps them a lot.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the base form or gerund without 'to'. Also, 'list' should be plural to match the general meaning. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun.

× Some people don't like to making list because they think it is a time consuming thing which never helps them a lot.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it is a time-consuming thing which never helps them a lot.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to lists in general, not a single list.

× I prefer to making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and the paper listed can be damaged or can be lossed her so I never used them.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and the paper list can be damaged or lost, so I never use them.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in gerund form without 'to'. 'Listed' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. 'Lossed' is not a word; the past participle of 'lose' is 'lost'. Also, 'used' should be present tense 'use' to match the context.

× I prefer to making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and the paper listed can be damaged or can be lossed her so I never used them.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I always have my phone with me and the paper list can be damaged or lost, so I never use them.

The phrase 'lossed her' is incorrect; 'lost' is the correct past participle of 'lose'. Also, 'her' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Sorry I forget things.

✓ Sorry, I forgot things.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the past tense 'forgot' should be used instead of the present tense 'forget'.

× I don't usually make a let's list so now, but when I was a child I like to make list for my work on that time.

✓ I don't usually make a list now, but when I was a child I liked to make lists for my work at that time.

'Let's list' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. 'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple lists. 'On that time' should be 'at that time'.

× I don't usually make a let's list so now, but when I was a child I like to make list for my work on that time.

✓ I don't usually make a list now, but when I was a child I liked to make lists for my work at that time.

'List' should be singular in the first clause and plural in the second to reflect general and multiple lists respectively.

× I don't usually make a let's list so now, but when I was a child I like to make list for my work on that time.

✓ I don't usually make a list now, but when I was a child I liked to make lists for my work at that time.

'On that time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' for specific points in time.

× It was too hard for me to manage my time to manage my households works and because of that I can and give a lots of time to my studies and which was so helpful for me also for improving my another skills as well.

✓ It was too hard for me to manage my time to manage my household chores, and because of that I could give a lot of time to my studies, which was very helpful for me and also for improving my other skills.

'Can and give' is incorrect; past tense 'could give' is needed. 'Households works' should be 'household chores'. 'A lots of' should be 'a lot of'. 'My another skills' should be 'my other skills'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Another thing is that as some of them don't know how to create a useful list for their works which will be helpful but on the other side they think it is a good day to remember all the things in their hand rather than making a list of.

✓ Another thing is that some of them don't know how to create a useful list for their work which would be helpful, but on the other hand, they think it is better to remember all the things in their hands rather than making a list.

'As some of them' is unnecessary; 'some of them' suffices. 'Works' should be 'work'. 'On the other side' should be 'on the other hand'. 'Good day' is incorrect; 'better' fits the meaning. 'In their hand' should be plural 'in their hands'. 'Making a list of' is incomplete; 'making a list' is correct.