列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using linking words. For example, say: "Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time."

示例: Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "Yes, I prefer to make a work list because it helps me remember my tasks and stay organized."

示例: Yes, I prefer to make a work list because it helps me remember my tasks and stay organized.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to express your opinion clearly with a complete sentence and supporting reason. For example: "I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time or is unnecessary."

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time or is unnecessary.

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and complete your thoughts. For example: "Earlier, I preferred writing lists on paper because I didn't have a mobile phone. However, now I prefer using my phone's notepad since I always carry it with me, making it very convenient."

示例: Earlier, I preferred writing lists on paper because I didn't have a mobile phone. However, now I prefer using my phone's notepad since I always carry it with me, making it very convenient.

× Yes, I like to make a list while going for shopping because it makes me easy to remind whatever things I have to buy.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list while going shopping because it makes it easy for me to remember whatever things I have to buy.

The phrase 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' where 'shopping' is used as a gerund after 'going'. Also, 'makes me easy to remind' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easy for me to remember' to properly express the idea.

× And additionally it reduces my time for remembering it.

✓ Additionally, it reduces the time I spend remembering it.

The phrase 'reduces my time for remembering it' is awkward and incorrect. The correct preposition and structure is 'reduces the time I spend remembering it' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I do prefer to make a list of my work because sometimes we forgot that what are the things we have to do.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list of my work because sometimes we forget what things we have to do.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate a habitual action. Also, the word order 'that what are the things' is incorrect; it should be 'what things' without 'are'.

× In our poll, take. So yes, I prefer to.

✓ In our poll, I take notes. So yes, I prefer to make lists.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I take notes' clarifies the meaning, and completing the sentence with 'I prefer to make lists' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I think those people think that are making list is time this thing thing which is.

✓ I think those people think that making a list is a waste of time.

The original sentence is fragmented and nonsensical. Reconstructing it to 'making a list is a waste of time' conveys the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× Earlier I prefer to write on a paper because at that time I don't have my mobile phone, but now I more prefer to write on a notepad of my mobile phone becauses mobile phone is the thing which we take everywhere with us and it is very.

✓ Earlier, I preferred to write on paper because at that time I didn't have my mobile phone, but now I prefer to write on the notepad of my mobile phone because the mobile phone is something we take everywhere with us and it is very convenient.

The verb tenses were inconsistent; 'prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' when referring to the past. 'Don't have' should be 'didn't have' to match past time. 'More prefer' is incorrect; simply 'prefer' is used. 'On a paper' should be 'on paper' without article. 'Becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'convenient' to finish the thought.