列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并且注意单词拼写和用词准确。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. For example, my list usually includes items like makeup and snacks to make sure I don't forget anything.

建议: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用具体细节说明如何制定和遵守工作计划。

示例: Yes, I always make lists for my work. For example, I set deadlines for each task and make sure to finish them on time. This method helps me stay organized and productive.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议明确表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并给出具体原因。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to spend that time doing important tasks directly.

建议: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，避免使用不准确的词汇。

示例: I prefer to make lists on paper, like using a calendar, because I can see everything clearly. If I use my phone, I might get distracted by notifications.

× Oh actually, yes, I always make a list before I'm going to show the The shopping list may obtain several parts, including makeup, snacks, and so on.

✓ Oh actually, yes, I always make a list before I go shopping. The shopping list may contain several parts, including makeup, snacks, and so on.

句子结构混乱，'before I'm going to show the'不通顺，应改为'before I go shopping'。'may obtain'用词不当，应改为'may contain'。建议简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

× I actually I always make list for my work in my daily life.

✓ I actually always make lists for my work in my daily life.

'make list'缺少复数形式，应该用'lists'表示多个清单。

× Such as sat several deadlines for each course an I approve myself must reach to go front before deadline.

✓ For example, I set several deadlines for each course and I remind myself to meet them before the deadline.

句子结构混乱，'sat'应为'set'，'an I approve myself must reach to go front before deadline'表达不清，应改为'I remind myself to meet them before the deadline'。建议使用简单句表达清楚意思。

× It really did a good job.

✓ It really does a good job.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'did'为过去时，不符合语境。

× From my perspective, I think these people think making list is a wasting of time.

✓ From my perspective, I think these people think making lists is a waste of time.

'making list'应为复数'making lists'，'a wasting of time'表达不正确，应为'a waste of time'。

× Within this time making the list they may complete 1 core course like.

✓ During the time spent making the list, they could complete one core course instead.

句子结构不完整且表达不清，'1 core course like'不合适，应明确表达为'one core course instead'。

× Oh nice, truly. I do prefer to make a list on paper such as calendar and taping everything's course on calendar and.

✓ Oh, nice, truly. I do prefer to make a list on paper, such as on a calendar, and write down all my courses on the calendar.

'taping everything's course'用词错误，应为'write down all my courses'，'everything's'错误使用所有格。

× Which do everyday.

✓ I do this every day.

句子缺少主语和谓语，'Which do everyday'不完整，应改为完整句子'I do this every day'。

× If I make a list on my phone, I may be discussed rated.

✓ If I make a list on my phone, I may get distracted.

'discussed rated'词组错误，正确表达应为'get distracted'，表示分心。