列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb forms and sentence structures to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy by being concise. For example, say "I always make a list when I go shopping because I write down everything I need and when I need it."

示例: I always make a list when I go shopping because I write down everything I need and when I need it. This helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

建议: Focus on using correct tenses and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work because I have a busy schedule and tend to forget important things. Therefore, making lists has always helped me stay organized."

示例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work because I have a busy schedule and tend to forget important things. Therefore, making lists has always helped me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

建议: Improve subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "It depends on the person. Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy and don't have time to prepare them."

示例: It depends on the person. Some people don't like making lists because they are very busy and don't have time to prepare them, so they prefer to remember things mentally.

建议: Work on sentence clarity and vocabulary usage. Avoid unclear phrases and use simple, direct language. For example, "I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because technology is widely used nowadays, and it's more convenient than paper."

示例: I definitely prefer to make lists on my phone because technology is widely used nowadays, and it's more convenient than paper. It helps me update and access my lists anytime easily.

× Definitely I making list whenever I go for shopping, even I have one small diving where I write my everything what I want and when I want it.

✓ Definitely I make a list whenever I go shopping, even I have one small diary where I write everything I want and when I want it.

The verb 'making' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'make' after 'I'. Also, 'diving' seems to be a typo for 'diary'. The phrase 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping'. The sentence needs these corrections to be grammatically correct.

× Definitely I making list whenever I go for shopping, even I have one small diving where I write my everything what I want and when I want it.

✓ Definitely I make a list whenever I go shopping, even I have one small diary where I write everything I want and when I want it.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition is omitted, so it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'my everything what I want' is incorrect; it should be 'everything I want' without 'my' or 'what'.

× Definitely I making list whenever I go for shopping, even I have one small diving where I write my everything what I want and when I want it.

✓ Definitely I make a list whenever I go shopping, even I have one small diary where I write everything I want and when I want it.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'diving' is likely a typo for 'diary', which is singular and countable, so 'one small diary' is correct.

× Yes I'm making this sometimes for my work becaused I have I had busy schedule sometimes I forgot important things that's why I tried to make list for work even it's worked for me all the time.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make this list for my work because I have a busy schedule. Sometimes I forget important things, that's why I try to make a list for work; it has worked for me all the time.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'I'm making' should be 'I sometimes make' to indicate habitual action. 'Becaused' is a typo for 'because'. 'I have I had' is redundant; 'I have' is correct. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense habitual action. 'Tried' should be 'try' for present habitual. 'It's worked' should be 'it has worked' for present perfect.

× Yes I'm making this sometimes for my work becaused I have I had busy schedule sometimes I forgot important things that's why I tried to make list for work even it's worked for me all the time.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make this list for my work because I have a busy schedule. Sometimes I forget important things, that's why I try to make a list for work; it has worked for me all the time.

The phrase 'busy schedule' needs an article 'a' before 'busy schedule'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is countable and singular.

× Yes I'm making this sometimes for my work becaused I have I had busy schedule sometimes I forgot important things that's why I tried to make list for work even it's worked for me all the time.

✓ Yes, I sometimes make this list for my work because I have a busy schedule. Sometimes I forget important things, that's why I try to make a list for work; it has worked for me all the time.

The phrase 'making this sometimes for my work' is awkward; 'make this list sometimes for my work' is better. Also, 'make list for work' should be 'make a list for work'.

× It's depend on people.

✓ It depends on people.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'depends' (third person singular). 'Depend' is plural form and incorrect here.

× Some people don't have time to make list, even some people is very. Busy in their schedule so they can't make list even they never get time to make it.

✓ Some people don't have time to make a list, even some people are very busy in their schedule so they can't make a list and they never get time to make it.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'some people'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' because 'list' is countable and singular here.

× Some people don't have time to make list, even some people is very. Busy in their schedule so they can't make list even they never get time to make it.

✓ Some people don't have time to make a list; even some people are very busy in their schedule, so they can't make a list and they never get time to make it.

The conjunction 'even' is used awkwardly here. It is better to separate ideas with a semicolon or period and use 'and' to connect clauses properly. Also, the sentence structure needs improvement for clarity.

× No doubt I prefer mobile phone to meeting list to be nursed.

✓ No doubt I prefer using my mobile phone to make lists.

The phrase 'to meeting list to be nursed' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition after 'prefer' is 'using' or 'to use' followed by the object. The sentence should clearly state the preference for making lists on the mobile phone.

× Modern era walls from technology, so everybody preferred mobile phone.

✓ In the modern era, with advances in technology, everybody prefers mobile phones.

'Walls from technology' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence needs to express that due to technological advances, people prefer mobile phones. Also, 'preferred' should be 'prefer' to match present tense.

× Even I also preferred to make a list too.

✓ I also prefer to make a list.

The past tense 'preferred' is incorrect here because the speaker is expressing a current preference. The present tense 'prefer' is appropriate.

× I use mobile phones to make list.

✓ I use my mobile phone to make lists.

'Mobile phones' is plural but the speaker likely means their own phone, so 'my mobile phone' is better. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists' or 'make a list' depending on context; plural 'lists' fits better here.