列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I try to make a list and whenever I go to shop" which is awkward. Also, correct grammar errors like "It keeps my shopping trips are short" to "It keeps my shopping trips short." Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list, especially for grocery shopping, so I stay on track and don't forget anything I need for the week. This helps keep my shopping trips short and efficient.

建议: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, which affect clarity. Avoid repetition like "I tried try" and incomplete thoughts like "in the." Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your sentences fully.

示例: I believe in pre-planning all my work. For my job, I make a list of all the activities I need to complete, and it usually helps me achieve my goals efficiently.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases and incomplete sentences, such as "going with the floor" and "He doesn't." Try to use correct expressions like "going with the flow" and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

示例: Some people prefer going with the flow and dislike planning ahead because they feel it constrains their freedom. For example, my husband likes to do things as they come without a fixed plan.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences, such as "after have I have jotted it down on a phone because." Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I am a bit of an old soul, so I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feel of a pen in my hand. Sometimes, I transfer the list to my phone after writing it down to keep it handy.

× I make a list so that I stay on track and I don't miss out the things I need for the whole week.

✓ I make a list so that I stay on track and don't miss the things I need for the whole week.

The phrase 'miss out the things' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'miss the things'. Also, the sentence is slightly awkward with the repeated 'I'. Removing the second 'I' before 'don't' improves flow and clarity.

× It keeps my shopping trips are short and some more official.

✓ It keeps my shopping trips short and more efficient.

The original sentence has incorrect structure: 'It keeps my shopping trips are short' is ungrammatical. The verb 'keeps' should be followed by an object complement without 'are'. Also, 'some more official' is unclear; 'more efficient' or 'organized' fits better in context.

× So even for my job I tried try and plan on all the.

✓ So even for my job I try to plan all the

The phrase 'I tried try' is a repetition and incorrect tense usage. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'I try' is appropriate. Also, 'plan on all the' is incomplete and should be 'plan all the'.

× All the activities that I need to complete, so I make a list and for the most part it helps me a lot to achieve my goals in the.

✓ All the activities that I need to complete, so I make a list, and for the most part, it helps me a lot to achieve my goals.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'in the.' Removing 'in the' completes the sentence properly. Adding commas improves readability.

× Some people just believe in going with the floor.

✓ Some people just believe in going with the flow.

The phrase 'going with the floor' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'going with the flow', meaning to accept things as they come.

× They don't like to plan things ahead an maybe they look at it as being constrained.

✓ They don't like to plan things ahead and maybe they look at it as being constrained.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× For example, my husband likes to do things as. Do things as they come.

✓ For example, my husband likes to do things as they come.

The sentence is fragmented. Combining the two parts into one complete sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× I prefer making list on paper.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the general statement. Also, the preposition 'on' is correct here.

× I might transfer the list after have I have jotted it down on a phone because.

✓ I might transfer the list after I have jotted it down on my phone because

The phrase 'after have I have' is incorrect and redundant. Correct order is 'after I have'. Also, 'on a phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed for clarity.