列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid redundancy. For example, say: 'Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it saves time and helps me find things quickly. Also, it prevents me from forgetting important items.'

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it saves time and helps me find things quickly. Also, it prevents me from forgetting important items.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. For example: 'Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me organize important tasks. At the start of the day, I write down what I need to do, so I can manage my time better.'

示例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me organize important tasks. At the start of the day, I write down what I need to do, so I can manage my time better.

建议: Your answer has many errors and unclear phrases. Use simple and correct sentences. For example, say: 'Some people with strong memories do not like making lists because they think it wastes time. They believe it is not an efficient method for them.'

示例: Some people with strong memories do not like making lists because they think it wastes time. They believe it is not an efficient method for them.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar and word choice errors. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid redundancy. For example: 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list instead of carrying paper.'

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. I always have my phone with me, so I can easily check my list instead of carrying paper.

× Yes, I make a list whenever I go to the market becauses save my time and I find the things very quickly while example when I have at least I don't forget the important items that I have to borrow so it is very convenient for me. For the use of the list.

✓ Yes, I make a list whenever I go to the market because it saves my time and I find things very quickly. For example, when I have a list, I don't forget the important items that I have to buy, so it is very convenient for me to use the list.

The original sentence uses 'becauses' incorrectly and has run-on sentences connected improperly with conjunctions like 'and' and 'while'. 'Because' is the correct conjunction to show reason. Also, the sentence needs to be split for clarity. Use 'because' to explain reason and separate examples with proper punctuation and conjunctions.

× Yes, I oftenly make a list for my book because it is very helpful for me.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my book because it is very helpful for me.

The adverb 'oftenly' is incorrect; the correct form is 'often'. 'Often' is an adverb of frequency and does not take the '-ly' suffix.

× At the start of the day I made the important things and on my list that is very important for doing so I manage I should you.

✓ At the start of the day, I make a list of important things that I need to do, so I can manage my tasks properly.

The sentence uses 'made' (past tense) incorrectly when describing a habitual action. The present tense 'make' is appropriate here. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Peoples that have strong memory don't like to make please be 'cause according to them least making is time taken soul.

✓ People who have a strong memory don't like to make lists because, according to them, list making takes time.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'person' is 'people'. 'Please be' is a mishearing or typo for 'lists'. 'Least making' should be 'list making'. Prepositions and word choice are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause it is very helpful for me whenever I go at market.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very helpful for me whenever I go to the market.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'market'; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating direction or destination.